This is amazing pleassee continue writing!

YESS A ZELRETCH THAT'S ACTUALLY GOOD AND NOT STUPID FANON

interesting-interesante

Good intro.
Looking forward to more.
Though could you clarify from what route is this Shirou?

Ooh, interesting start. Using Zelretch as a plot device is a little contrived, but I think it worked pretty well here, especially since you didn't just drop an exposition dump. I also like the pacing so far, although... you're throwing him straight into the deep end? Hm.
Alright.

Anyway, good job! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. c:

That was a pretty good intro. I find him surrendering for the sake of his captors lives both amusing and oddly in character. Good job.

first x over in a while with our favourite faker in the world of super douches and this is the kind of half-assed story we get-_-

hmmmmm, lets see where this goes

Hmmmm good start

Interesante historia espero con ansias por el próximo capítulo.
Espero que Shirou este lo suficiente fuerte para dar batalla a todos los peligros del universo marvel

Interesting.

I hope he meets either the ancient one or dr strange

I like how you portrayed Zelretch here.

lol, also i like how shirou has the best outcome in mind and rather not possibly kill lots of people, but at some point or another he'll have to be with equally powerful people who help protect others.

Interesting. I wonder what route this Shirou is from. At the moment I feel doubtful it's the Heaven's Feel or the UBW route but we'll see.