ugh, the stutter killed it

its pretty good, quite a few grammar problems but its easily overlooked. keep it up, i like it

I hope you continue this story. It is so epic!

...what? I’ll give you an A for effort on the originality of the speech at least...

You obviously weren’t thinking when you made this chapter. You broke every shred of suspension of disbelief right there at the end of this chapter. They would NOT under ANY CIRCUMSTANCES take the exam before the others did. It would happen at the same time otherwise it would be redundant because people can now gain an advantage in Gen Ed

Please continue to write this story, the feels are to much I would very much like to know how it will go. Or if you don't plan on continuing please let me know.

Hello,
I only just got to chapter 13, but from what I've read it's been okay so far. The story's progressing at a fast pace, and in some chapters it just feels plane rushed. I feel like you definitely need an editor. There are many, and i mean MANY grammatical errors as well as spelling errors. The story has a good premise, and Izuku's quirk, Illusion, does seem to be moderately thought out, though it still feels like somethings missing. In a lack of a better way to explain this, the story seems hollow, rushed, and impatient. Flush out character interactions, dedicate at least a full chapter to an arc instead of glossing over it like you did with the USJ, and elaborate on the explanations you have Izuku give sometimes.

Again, I've only read the first 12 chapters, so as far as i know the story could have gotten 10 times better from chapter 13 onward, though from the small bit i saw from skimming through, it doesn't look like it in this chapter at least. I sincerely hope that you can take this review and the things i pointed out to better this story, and if you want, i can even share a google doc I've made of Illusions where I've added input, notes, and edited the chapters to flow better and fixed the errors.

I hope this doesn't come off as rude, seeing as this is an exercise one of my teachers encouraged me to go through with as a way to further my understanding of story writing as well as get practice in writing and editing! It started as a hobby, and grew to be something I'd turn in for her to see and check my edits, and seeing how compelling this story is, i couldn't resist; Anyways, I'll stop rambling now, seeing as i'm getting off topic and even starting to annoy myself a little bit! I wish you luck with this story, and can't wait for further chapters and for you to learn and better yourself as well.

Warm Regards,
Yuqui~

Deku is too wimpy...

This entire story so far has been pretty awesome and can't wait for it to be updated again!
However if there one thing I would like to happen is that there would be more All Might interactions but I can definitely understand why they are so few of them so far.

Omg this is great, why in hell it has only 12 reviews? You are an awesome writter! Hope you have a nice day!

This is great! I can't wait for an update!

This is great! I can't wait for an update!

"I'd only received my quirk when I was ten, after I'd tried to kill myself. That's how quirkless people are treated. One of the first thoughts I had when I woke up was that I couldn't even kill myself correctly, how pathetic."

This was the Quote near the end of the chapter I'm on. I know I'm probably just Judging too hard, but I feel like you could have had Izuku explain that with a few more sentences so it would make more sense.

Also, you should have said, "One of the first thoughts I had when I woke up was how pathetic I had to not even be able to kill myself correctly." I feel it fits better than, "One of the first thoughts I had when I woke up was that I couldn't even kill myself correctly, how pathetic."

Sorry for that, I just feel like this last part needed some proper Attention, and I feel like you rushed it a bit.

Wow I gotta say Midoriya has had it rough the last few hours looks like endeavor traumatized him. You think about getting some payback for izuku? Kinda wish there was more to the chapter though.

This is really good, thank you for writing it.