You have some really interesting concepts in this story, but you have some pretty major inconsistency issues. It's like a different pesron is writing each new chapter, they skim the basics, but fail to grasp any details relevant to the overall plot. It was excusable in the first few chapters, but at a point, it gets to be all I can see. Eventually, I found myself criticizing more than enjoying. It seems you are done with this story, so I leave this review as constructive criticism for any future writing projects.

great story! thanks. how about a sequel?

Alice is going to die for this! this is so exciting that i can hardly stop reading long enough to comment.

poor Alice, she has totally lost the plot. does animal blood act like lead poisoning in a vampire brain?

Alice is going to get them all killed! what a hateful little bitch.

the Cullens are going to be very unhappy that they aren't going to be able to coerce Isa into changing her diet. alice is nor going to like not seeing her future and Edward won't be able to mind rape her. Isa doesn't need a mother or a father so i hope Rose and Emmett love her.

Sequel sequel

Wow wow wow I can't wait to see what you write next. Awesome writing.

Loved the story. Is there going to be a sequel?

So, the idea is fun, but the consistency is non existent and apparently this is ABANDONED not complete so I'm stopping now. You really should be honest in your description though, it's just rude to lead readers on.

is there any more to this story as in really enjoying it

Well, this last chapter was disappointing. First, I didn't expect Aro to be able to pick up on so much of the encounter in Mexico. Second, I had hoped he never figured out Isa was the sponge. I expected Isa to have been thorough in her keeping Aro, or anyone else from finding out about her. After all, this entire story was about her ability to keep others from knowing, or remembering who she is and to keep them from being able to reveal herself to the Volturi, Aro specifically.

Which brings me to after the battle in the Pacific NW. I was quite surprised and disappointed she didn't cloak herself from everyone's mind who was there, which includes anyone's viewpoint of her in their thoughts, so as not to pick up on the little hints to reveal her gifts.

Now that Aro knows, it gives Isa a huge disadvantage, which is why this last chapter makes the whole premise of the story disappointing.

However, with that all said, I was really enjoying this story, VERY much, even considering the grammar/spelling mistakes! Edward was a weasel, but Alice infuriated me. The deceitfulness of Alice made her worse than Maria by far. Carlisle was almost a non-factor in this story, though he was made out to be one, he was more like a stick-figure, an example of a vampire on a pure animal diet, but he never really came off as that bad to me. He just seemed like the pacifist he is and a bit weak, but nothing like Alice, who was insane before she became a vampire. Therefore, her actions weren't really relevant on the animal diet either, but more on the fact that one's personality traits as a human can carryover into the vampire.

I was very impressed by Isa throughout this story, as well as her connections with Garrett, Peter, and Charlotte prior to meeting Jasper. I had a feeling in the beginning what would happen when she met Jasper, but I liked the way it happened very much! Not only did she go seeking him out, but how their finding each other came from his point of view (if I remember that right). Basically, I liked how it all came about.

I also delighted in the creativeness of Isa's gifts and how some of them worked. It was quite funny when she leaped them to a remote location suddenly, which threw off the Major for a slight bit. :) I was a little surprised Isa didn't have some power, or way to escape the shifter teeth binds she was in.

And oh, how my heart was torn out when Jasper ran from Isa in that manner after she revealed her findings on animal blood. Thankfully, she had sense enough to trail after him and keep an eye on him from a distance. And then it was torn out again when she transported him back to their room at the Cullen house but not until his feelings on it were revealed. I felt so bad from him at that point. And then his being blindsided by Maria and taken. This did show your view on how the animal diet weakened a notoriously strong vampire and how Maria was able to best him.

It was wonderful of Isa to stand up for Emmett and Rose as she did and keep them from the Volturi's grip.

All-in-all, you should take this review as a show of how much I appreciated it (grammar/spelling flaws and all) and got into the story. The creativeness was very enjoyable! :D Thank you.

II am going with your theory on this story, but I really enjoy the aspect from the original series where the Cullens cared enough about human life to consume animal rather than human blood. I didn't see it as weakening them, nor in them losing who they were. Plus, given the environment they started their immortal life I would think they would have seen enough death, torture, and evil that they would enjoy - at the very least - being a partial "vampire vegetarian". So, it is going to be a little harder for me to grasp your story's concept, but I will.

Other than that, I am enjoying the story so far. I'm glad Jasper and Isa finally found each outer. I am curious as to Jasper's not wanting to open the tin though.

Sequel...sequel

Is this the ending?