I think anonymous reviews go through a three day waiting process or something, so these are just showing up now, but for everyone seeing this, I accidentally uploaded the same chapter twice. The problem has been fixed now, and the chapter 4 you see here should be different from chapter 3 now.

Can't wait for chapter 5!

Okay... How the hell did I miss this?! Or how did I not notice this?! The story is pretty hardcore so kudos to you. The sex for every maybe brief but still, they all get some hardcore love. Looks like something that should be on e-hentai.

Keep up the good work.

That was...intense. There was some pretty hardcore stuff there that is very rarely seen on FanFiction. The farting, the choking, the urination...all very intense, and I wasn't surprised that this was posted on AO3 as well. It's like a very hardcore Infinite Stratos H-doujin.

This just a teaser for the long story or this it?

once again truly special

I got to say first I didn't read the story, more like I am wondering on how the idea for this came to your mind and how it would even work?

I gotta admit. Smut wise, this story has a really high quality, although the way your represent Ichika or those girls isn't really in the character. About the whole thing of taking on the school. You got a boy girl ratio of 1 - 1200. You gotta be a god on something like that. I don't really think that Ichika is stuck in a hellish high school paradise which is a real conflictual sentence. About the Chifuyu part, I don't really know. I'm a little bit conflicted. As for the girls, they are luckily altered a bit so they won't kill Ichika.

Let's just keep it like this. For getting my dose of mind gutter and stuff, this story is good enough. But that's about it. Honne's addition was a nice extra part, she got a real fanbase in this section. As for the Madoka part, for some reason, that's where I'm a sucker at but there are things that are not that big a turn on. Anyways, nice job.
Saluut.

Hmm if it not much to ask can you please do Ichika/Tabane chapter? I just really like to read more of it.