Reviews for Freelancer, Medic, Mage
RyanMK666 chapter 8 . 8/27/2019
It really sucks that this story is basically dead, I bloody well enjoyed these 8 chapters, if you do have any intention of coming back to this, then I hope you keep up the good work, if you’re now focusing on life and what not, then I wish you luck in whatever you’re pursuing.
~Ryan
Multipule-Characters1-Acct chapter 8 . 6/21/2019
Just to let you know, GATE:TTBGKAH has updated recently.
Reclusive Dork chapter 8 . 12/22/2018
-that was the story I confused with Xenagogy for Belligerent AIs. GATE: Thus The Blood Gulchers Kicked Ass Here.

I read them both around the same time, and they're both Red vs Blue crossovers, so, sorry.
TitusVorenus chapter 8 . 10/18/2018
If continuing this story please consider making the Grif siblings descendants of Percy Weasley and Simmons a descendant of Ron Weasley just to have the reaction of both of them finding out they're related, with Athena laughing at the irony of the situation.
jh831 chapter 8 . 8/26/2018
story is interesting.
however, it is hard to figure out what is going on. i understand what is going on in general, but just the jumping from one thing to another is getting confusing.
as in, you have the main part of the story with the future. then you have a paragraph of what is going on at hogwarts for a paragraph or two. then back to the normal red vs blue.
a suggestion, have one chapter at hogwarts and one chapter with red vs blue. that way it is less confusing and getting each part be eaquil. insteaed of bringing up hogwarts as an after thought.
also, will you be telling us what happened when carolina and vriginia first arive?
other than that. it is a good story so far
Tenzo51 chapter 8 . 7/21/2018
Hey, it sure if you plan to update this anytime soon but I had to ask, could you go about the whole locus becoming the new meta in a different way. Like in the sense of both locus and sigma getting redeemed, I mean canon wise do we ever really see sigma or Maine actually do anything truly evil, he steals shit from freelancer, AI, and absorbs Tex, that last one being really the only true evil one. Sigma has always just wanted to be human and from the other angle locus has wanted to be the perfect soldier, them finding a weird middle ground for both ends does in a strange way make some sense. Just curious.
myafroatemydog chapter 2 . 7/9/2018
Interesting first chapter
Leaf Ranger chapter 8 . 5/21/2018
heh, always enjoyed RVB, and this was quite an interesting crossover. Having Harry end up there in Project Freelancer. It is kind of cool that this has led to several Freelancers being spared, so far at least. I'm hoping they'll stay alive, but guess we'll see.

It is funny though, you stole the name for one of my Freelancer OCs. Agent Virginia, a female Freelancer who specializes in demolition and destruction. Basically imagine a black haired version of Nora with a grenade launcher, brute gravity hammer, and who was born mute but had an electronic voice synthesizer installed. The humor was how she was always upbeat and energetic, but spoke in an electronic monotone. Plus that her AI fragment, Kappa, was always moping, depressed, and fearful.

I also had another Agent who was paired with Carolina: Agent California. Overall weapon experts, pretty laid back and cool, AI fragment was...forgot her designation. Darn. But she was essentially the Director's confidence, which might be why she is a female, because like Beta/Tex, she was embodied by Allison, who gave the Director confidence. Sorry if that sounds weird or stupid, was just what I had.

anyways, off track. So far this was really interesting and awesome. I'm liking this fanfic as well, and I'm eager to see more of this fanfic. Keep it up!
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 8 . 4/30/2018
Grif no, the cake is a lie!
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 6 . 4/29/2018
Actually, I can still see Temple going on a rampage over what happened to Biff, only in this case due to said friend getting maimed/nearly killed/possibly crippled for life.
Infernus est in animo chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
But it would be such great mother-daughter bonding...
LoamyCoffee chapter 8 . 4/21/2018
I find this funnier than the canon. Good stuff!
Jahoan chapter 8 . 4/21/2018
Lopez's dialog on the show is actually written using Google Translate.
FateBurn chapter 8 . 4/21/2018
good chapter
Dragon Master Naruto 003 chapter 8 . 4/21/2018
My only request... Don't kill Locus, the twins or the AI (Including Epsilon and Alpha Church)... really a majority of the characters you have introduced... Felix is up in the air. I like him but he's an ass. Keep up the good work.
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