ah, no kiss? sad day. This story was amazing! ive veen staying up all night just to read it. i loved every minute of it! i do feel blue balled for the fluffy cuddle scene thiugh tbh haha

so close to Zelink cuddles

your writing definitely has Improved 3 I'm really loving your characterization as well. Its in it own way, not out of character, while at the same time introducing new ideas

i find it odd that someone shouted malons dad fell asleep again, yet later in the chapter they are talking about how she misses him because she moved away?

fun fact, just read this in the master works book for this game. Link got the master sword at 12-13 years old

there seems to be a lot of run in sentences in this chapter. Have you thought about rvising your beggining chapters?

i just love the interaction between kid Link and Zelda haha. I can also totally seeing link being a mischievous little bastard haha

is mipha an adult here like its said in miphas diary, or a child as well?

It's over. Huh. What are these wet things on my face?

Wait a second... ONION NINJAS! GET OUT OF HERE, YOU LITTLE PESTS!

Well, as Dr. Seuss once said, "Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." Does it count if I do both of those? Or do they cancel each other out, like some sort of math equation?

Eh, I'm confusing myself, as per usual. I loved this story, and I'm certainly looking forward to more of your work! So do keep it up!

As for your lawn... Well, Urbosa will help me out by summoning some lightning for me. And if that doesn't work, I guess my own lawn could use some warmth.

I'll keep this review short, I loved your story, I will definitely check out whatever you release in the future, and thank you for writing an amazing story.

And so everything comes to a close. The deal has been satisfied, a kingdom now has a chance at rebirth, and a hero who long believed himself to be an instrument now is free to choose his way of life. The future is uncertain, but it guarantees to have more surprises.

With that rambling aside, this was a nice end for the story. Short and sweet. Believe me, I'm cool with long epilogues, but I doubt it'd work in this context. Plus, this one wraps up everything necessary: Link's relationship with Zelda further blossoming, the strange collector, and letting the memories of the past fade to mere memory. A nice way to wrap up those last little bits.

It is sad to see this story end, but a wise man once said, "where one story ends, another begins." I look forward to your future works, and am glad to have joined in on this journey. Till next time,

Sayonara

I demand a conclusion

A hard lesson for one to learn, especially when the past eludes them. I think that was a good move you went for Link, him having to see his past was not needed. That everything he strived for was in the present. Then again, you lose your memory, and you feel alien until you have some kind of background to support yourself. But through it all, Link saw one common threat that helped him out. Why he went against Alfonzo, why the sword listened to him and aided him, what guided him after awakening, and what he fought the Calamity for. Nice tie in there.

And now Zelda is stepping into her own too. No longer will she have someone to rely on. Just lime when she unlocked her power, when she put herself out there she found she had the strength all along. It sure came in handy with the debacle between the Rito and Gerudo. Which makes me curious: was there such tension between those races? Ah well. And of course Impa would have that "tough love" encouragement.

And that was a nice, tender moment when the two reunite. The edge and animosity is gone, and what once was has been born anew. Now they have a new challenge, and one they fare much better in facing. Still, only time will tell.

Till the final chapter,

Ja ne

With this being my first time on this website and also being my first ever fan fiction to be read, I was honestly expecting this to be really, I don't know, for lack of a better word, bad. It's probably just this illusion that I've created because I usually don't like stories that aren't created by their original creators. But yours? Damn. Like wow, I know it's probably since I'm not very good at writing (Being a young and aspiring writer and all) but just wow. It's just so amazing how you show the changes in character so smoothly, all the while making a character that isn't shown to speak into such a life like person. I know I'm probably overly exaggerating how good this story and the writing is, but at the time of writing this, it's as good as I'm making it out to be.
There are very few universes that make me want to write fan fiction for them, but the Legend of Zelda just has this certain pull that makes it impossible to not want to, at least for me. I was just starting to write one that takes place two generation after botw with link's family after he passed and botw links grandson being the new hero and zelda family, well... Being zelda and having to face off deal with the uncertainty of canons return with hyrule still a shadow of its former self.
Sorry for making this so long, it's my first ever review of something and I'm not usually one to write things for other people to see due to my certain insecurities and shyness, but thank you very much if you read this, and thank you very much also for the amazing read, can't wait to read everything else that you write in the future!

Wow this is actually it, next chapter is the final one. Thank you for such an entertaining and emotional story, I really don't know what to criticize here because I'm really not a good reviewer but good job, you should be proud. This story has kept me into the art of writing/typing. Hopefully when I'm done with the first draft of my next story you can be the first one to read it. Anyways, I'm so excited for the next chapter! :D

AH, the FEELS! You BETTER get that last chapter out soon! Well, not necessarily in, like, the next five minutes. I can wait a few days... probably. I might set a couple of lawns on fire while waiting, but I can still wait.

I think that your story and plot are very well planned! Sometimes grammar isn't the most important part of a story. Take my writing, for instance. I kind of make stuff up as I go, and sometimes that ruins the flow. But even if you are doing the same, you make it work, and that is great!

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, OR I WILL SET YOUR LAWN ON FI- I mean... I will... set your fawn on lyre. Yes, that's what I meant, even though it makes absolutely no sense.