This was a touching story, but there were certain parts I found confusing. Why did Lynn and Rita mention twins twice? Did Lori have a twin at birth, and is that why Lynn Sr. suggested that the only reason they had Leni was because of that? I feel that could have been shall we say, expressed a little further

Beautiful, with such a sad, yet warmly nostalgic tone. I don’t often give much thought to Rita and Lynn Sr as characters, but you’ve fleshed them out in such a fantastic way; not just as parents, but as husband and wife and as individuals. Fantastic job.

This was an amazing story. Looking back is always hard, but there is a joy in it. Rita and Lynn were amazingly developed, and it was so nice to see the children when they were younger. And it was a very well done subplot with the stillborn sister.

You deserve way more credit.

I really liked this.
Lori being born with a stillborn twin was pretty tragic. You showed their emotions well.
Liked the touch of (second) Leni being a source of worry early on for them.
Very cute and surprisingly emotional story.

In fifteen or twenty years, the two of them will be thinking and saying the same thing about the house they live now when they downsize. Also, in ten or fifteen years, Lori and Bobby will have a little 'red' house of their own to eventually look back fondly on.

This is why I like this. It shows them as people looking back and moving forward like everyone else.

Awww, this was sweet, and a nice way to look back on the past lives of the Loud family.

AS always, keep up the great writing!

"I still hear you in the breeze, see your shadows in the trees, holding on memories never change..."

Wow mate... just wow... I don't know what to say. Sometimes, it's easy to think of the loud family as static- always having been in the same place despite everything that's happened to them. And yet, you went here and showed just how deep their past really is. And well, we really need more stories that treat them as such.

Great work mate! I'd rate but, I remember talking to you about this one and giving it a rating would be unfair.

Something original and heartwarming... Good work.

That is an awesome story. This is going on my favorites list.

Love this one.