Reviews for Danganronpa: Laughable Rejects
PainX65 chapter 12 . 6/7
So we have the first murder with Ayano being the one to bite the dust. Sad to see her go, she was cool and definitely one of my favourites of the bunch. Guess its time to theorise her death now with the upcoming investigation and who the blackened will turn out to be. I did see two theories that I liked that were quite interesting whether it was Ayano or Eki but I wonder. For now though, it's probably best to wait until the next chapter to really start thinking that stuff through eh. Until then!
AnonChan1 chapter 12 . 6/6
Heyo, nice to see an update! Sad that it’s Murder Time, though... Poor victim. Whoever they are.

That’s... Very fair, actually- Especially because Cherry and Kichi don’t even have their luck flipping wildly between the two, like Nagito does. It especially sucks for Cherry, the poor girl.

Fate, as a concept, is... Tricky. Definitely ironic, in the end, but difficult to come to terms with, especially when your “fate” gives you a really bad hand. The hero worshipping though, is... Hm, well, a large part of it is wish fulfillment, I’d think? Most people know they might not be all that, but seeing it happen, fake or no, can be nice.

But then, you probably aren’t asking for my philosophical rambling or whatever, haha.



You know, I don’t know if I’ve said it, but I really like how Monojoker’s threats aren’t... Empty? Like, he had to use the motive twice to get people to start murdering, and don’t get me wrong! It sucks for the characters, that they’re losing people they love, but I feel like I don’t actually see motives like this put to use all that much? If you know what I mean. Anyways, it’s cool!

Not wanting sweets all the time is fair- I have a massive sweet tooth, but even I draw the limit somewhere.

Huh... Speak of the Devil, indeed- Wonder what she’s doing. I mean, as androids, I don’t think they’d need to eat? So either she’s cooking just to cook, or she’s cooking for the students, which is... Nice, I guess? But weird, and also they probably won’t trust what she’s made, at least at first.

I do agree with Kichi- Being caretakers while also waiting for one of them to snap is... Weird? Counterproductive to one of those tasks? But also, I really wouldn’t say that to them, if only to avoid antagonizing them.

Oof, those crepes do sound good, though... Damnit, now I want crepes.

That... Would be pretty creepy, not gonna lie. Hopefully that specific feature doesn’t cause too many problems down the line... Though I do wonder why they look so similar. Like, was it on purpose?

Well, there goes Ayano... She seems worked up about something, though- And whats with the bag?

Guess we won’t find out. Yet, at least... Anyways, it now seems Genki wants... Something... And I guess Norio is standing guard? Actually, that makes sense, he always seems on high alert, and this pool party might piss off Monojoker and friends, so he’s watching over the... Show runner, I guess? Of that thing.

So he’s moving the party up, then... That... Seems like it might not go well? Less because it’s a totally bad idea, and more because (A) I know there’s a murder in this chapter, and (B) This is Danganronpa, nothing ever ends well.

Haha, anyways, looks like it’s swimsuit time! This should be interesting... Hopefully it doesn’t get ruined by Death. I mean, it probably will, but still.

I’m loving the dynamic between Tsukae and Hibiki, not gonna lie. Something about it makes me smile... They just kinda bounce off of each other really well, you know?

That’s... Fair, you do have to wonder about how he got the measurements. But then, it is Monojoker, and I wouldn’t put it past him (And the Mastermind, I guess?) to either take measurements when they were asleep or unconscious, or to access their records to find out.

Gotta say that I’m with Cherry on this one- The swimsuit sounds pretty, don’t get me wrong! But it also sounds a bit... Not up my alley. Better than nothing, though.

Ah, Chris seems to be feeling better...! A little bit, at least- And it’s probably for the best that he take it easy instead of go to the pool party. God knows that the poor thing needs it.

Well, most everyone seems to be here, outside of a few select people- Even if some of the ones who did attend didn’t actually want to... But oh well! Nothing much to be done about it. Anyways, I’m definitely glad to see that Ayano is feeling a bit better- And it’s sweet of her to help Cherry with swimming! Seriously, I’m gonna be very sad if she dies sometime soon, she’s a good girl and I love her.

Pfft, guess Kichi appreciates it, too.

Aaand I spoke too soon. Here come the Monohelpers, they’re here to ruin everything...! Or maybe not, if the students don’t start something? Hopefully not. At the very least, they aren’t trying anything immediately... Though relaxing is hard when your captors are right there.

Ooohhh no, okay, maybe I’m being paranoid but it’d be just Cherry’s bad luck for one of the first victims to be someone she likes. I am experiencing Fear. Then again, maybe those sugar crystals will be the extent of her bad luck?

I’m irreversibly nervous now though, and I’m really hoping that Cherry feeling sick and Ayana’s cough isn’t gonna be bad news. Please just be nerves.

Banri, child, your talk of being a soldier makes me feel things. Mostly worry and concern, because I still don’t know his talent, and even if he’s a chaotic gremlin I’d like for said talent to not be something too harmful.

Not gonna lie, evil murder carnival aside, that ride sounds really fun. I kinda wanna give it a spin.

OKAY SOMETHING WAS FUCKY WITH THAT COTTON CANDY, CALLING IT NOW. CHERRY AYANO GO WITH HIM. DONT DIE. I MEAN CHERRY BARELY TOUCHED HERS BUT HHH IM NERVOUS NOW OH NO.

Kinda funny to see Monojoker scolding his helpers, though, not gonna lie. They deserve it.

BACK TO THE OH NO STUFF KICHI GET SOME DAMN MEDICINE PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU. Hhh Cherry seems okay though so maybe I’m freaking out over nothing? Though we still haven’t seen Ayano... Oh geez.

Those noises aren’t good, though... Hhh please be alive Ayano.



FUCK OKAY IT WASNT NOTHING OH GOD AYANO BABY YOU DIDNT DESERVE THAT IT SOUNDS AWFUL OH GOD

Good luck writing!
~ AnonChan1
The First Murder chapter 12 . 6/5
My goodness! I was not expecting the first murder to be as grim in its appearance as this has been! Ayano has not gone through a more peaceful death, whatever she had to go through before she passed away the blackened definitely didn't pull the punches in making sure that it was effective and had no chance of failing in terms of killing Ayano.

There are a few people who stand out as potential blackened but I won't make any comments yet as to who seems the most suspicious but I am sure that the investigation will bring to light a lot of clues and information that we can use to inform our analysis.

Thanks for the chapter Sona! Your work is as awesome as it always is and I hope you have a good June and in turn summer :D
DancingCactuar chapter 12 . 6/5
I posted the review without even logging in xD

The previous review was from me I can confirm that for you Sona, still I will add on here that I think you deserve an extra large round of applause to be able to do all of this whilst being a superstar student and an awesome friend. I'm so glad to have a friend like you :D
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 12 . 6/5
RIP Ayano.
For a moment there I was wondering if Kichi was going to die, since the deathflags seemed evenly spread out between him and Ayano for a while. But nope, it's our Seagull, just as Sharky predicted.
Anyway, great work on getting this out, I look forward to the next chapter
Ziggymia123 chapter 12 . 6/5
Poor Ayano. I (and basically everyone else) knew that she would die but I still hoped otherwise. She was growing on me with her relationship with Cherry. Even if she also obviously tried to kill Cherry with the blue powder that she put on the cotton candy. Obviously some kind of poison or toxin.

And the state of her body is making me think that she ended up eating the tainted cotton candy instead by mistake. Which could be an honest mistake, or someone could have swapped out the candies. Someone probably swapped the food. And by someone, I mean Kichi.

But we shall see!
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 11 . 3/17
Great work Persie! !
Guest chapter 11 . 3/16
Damn bro, almost had me there with the fake out. That would have been nasty, getting rid of the fan favorite. Sucks for Chris, but someone had to draw the short end of the stick. As for the new androids(?), they seem like a rowdy bunch. Hopefully better than the Monokubs were, not that that would be difficult.
AnonChan1 chapter 11 . 3/16
Hello again!

Sorry, Kichi, but you aren’t getting out of things that easily. You and Cherry are both stuck in this game for the foreseeable future, whether you like it or not.

Yeah, all of this is... Kinda inconvenient, really. They don’t even have bathrooms attached to the tents! Trigger Haply Havoc, Goodbye Despair, and Killing Harmony had that, at least, if I’m remembering correctly... Actually, now that I think about it, how protected are these tents against the elements? Will they get soaked through in a rainstorm?

Uh... Kichi, I’d think your sister possibly being missing is cause for concern? Don’t get me wrong, I want her to be okay, but also... The situation is very... Not Good? I don’t know, maybe I’m paranoid.

Ew. I wouldn’t wanna think about that, either.

Okay, I’m getting some bad vibes. I mean, it... Could easily be nothing, I guess? But I’m still really, really worried- Especially since it would be just Cherry’s luck to get killed first. Or worse, kill someone on accident. Just... I don’t know where Cherry is and I am! Experiencing! Fear!

Damnit... Damnit, all the language points to someone having died, and the only one missing is Cherry. I just- Goddamnit, if this is what I think it is... I wanted her to make it,

Goddamnit. It’s Cherry, isn’t it. She’s dead. There’s no way she isn’t.

FUCKING SON OF A GODDAMN BITCHY LAMPSHADE WHAT THE FUCK. EVEN IF SHE DIED SHE DIDNT DESERVE A BRUTAL DEATH LIKE THAT. CHERRY BABY NO.

This is... So, so fucked up. I think this might be one of the more brutal first kills I’ve seen. Just... Poor Cherry... Poor Kichi, too. He shouldn’t have had to learn like that. He’ll definitely have nightmares, I can say that much, at least.

Kichi I get where you’re coming from but lashing out really isn’t gonna help things. Kichi put the knife down. Kichi please.

Norio... Thanks, I guess. Best to knock him out before he hurts himself.



Oh... OH. IT WAS A NIGHTMARE. THANK THE LORD.

Trust me, Cherry, you really, really don’t wanna know what the nightmare was about... I mean, I guess it wouldn’t hurt, but you hardly need more stress right now, and I doubt Kichi wants to think about the nightmare, too much.

Hey, wipes are better than nothing, right?

I will admit that, while undoubtably annoying for the characters, having them consistently wear the same clothes is very convenient for those who aren’t characters,

Well, this isn’t gonna end well. If nothing else, someone will be dead by the end of the day- It just might not be one of these guys.

Could that be... A Norio and Tsukae friendship forming? I mean, it could also just be Norio Keeping an eye on people, but a friendship with them would be interesting!

Yeah, Shiho is kinda... Um, odd. Not necessarily in a bad way- Haven’t seen enough of her for that, yet- But her being so chipper is certainly weird, given... Uh, everything, you know? Hopefully that’s just how she is and not something bad,

Everyone is certainly dealing with this differently... I’d probably be one of the nervous ones, like Hibiki or Shion.

Poor kids aren’t gonna be happy when this all turns very, very real on them.

Alright, Hibiki, I love you, but you may have jinxed it. Also, Hotaru, why... Why are you like this. It’s very distressing, and this isn’t the time. Hotaru please.

God, this is gonna suck for Chris, isn’t it? Poor guy just wants to help people- Far as I can tell, anyways- And even if they think it’s faked, it doesn’t change how real it’ll look, you know? It still fucking sucks.

Ugh, this is gonna suck... Be strong, Chris!

Oh lord, that was... Awful. Poor Chris, that... Could not have been easy to see. Ugh, and then they paraded the poor man’s head around like a damn trophy... It’s screwed up.

Yeah, Hibiki has a point- It’s easy to say “stay calm” when it isn’t you in the hot seat.

Wow. Are these guys like... Preemptive Monokubs or something? Anyways, let’s see... We have... Teddy, Carolina, Belle, Barnabus, and... JJ? I’m assuming that’s his name for now.

Suppose it’s good that some of them are back up and running? Maybe not perfectly, but it’s better than paralyzed by fear or disgust. Also, I could swear? That Banri’s laugh? Reminds me of something? I don’t know what, though... Hm.

That’s a very ominous line, Kichi. Please don’t do something stupid.

Good luck writing!
~ AnonChan1
AnonChan1 chapter 10 . 4/29/2019
Heyo!

Offering to help out the others definitely couldn’t hurt- And yeah, I’d definitely say they’re doing pretty well, bonding-wise. Wonder who exactly they’ll hang out with next, though.

Ah, of course Monojoker decides to bug them. Poor things... And eugh, yeah, somehow I’m not surprised about how interested he is in how traumatized and upset that stupid motive left everyone... Asshole. God, though, I’m really hoping he hasn’t bothered Ayano- That’s the last thing the poor girl needs, after that video.

Kichi, I’m pretty sure his only reason for this is the Despair (TM). It sucks, and there might be more, but I wouldn’t be surprised if there isn’t.

Rules... I’d actually forgotten that those are a thing. But! It’s good they have them now, it’d suck if they did something against them and didn’t even realized... Even if most of these rules are probably just for the killing game’s benefit. Oh well.

Wait wait wait- Killers can have THREE victims? That’s... Concerning. Wonder if it’s a red herring or there’s actually gonna be a three-victim case.

The punishment and class trial is obviously... Well, we all know what that’s about. As for the rebirth thing... Hm. Maybe it’s taking their talent away? Though it doesn’t mention that... Maybe they’re reborn via Despair? I’m honestly not sure. Hm.

Everyone seems to be enjoying themselves well enough!... Uh. Everyone that isn’t Norio, at least. Poor guy has to deal with Banri.

Gabriel?... Why is he always in a trash can? I mean, I guess if he likes it well enough, but it’s kinda... Um, disgusting? Concerning health wise? Generally unsafe due to how easily they get knocked over? Various other reasons I don’t feel like listing?... Either way, seems he’s our next free time event.

I’m glad they’re offering to help him out- Poor boy needs it. Also, off topic, but a ride like that sounds like something I’d love? Yes I’m an adrenaline junkie, shush. Anyways, looks like Gabe likes cleaning, but not his talent... Well, cleaning it isn’t the same as studying it, so it makes enough sense to me. Either way, I still like him, so I hope whatever his reasoning is isn’t horrifically traumatic.



Yeah, with Cherry’s luck, her being up so high might not be a good idea. I’d really rather her not fall and hurt herself. And hey, she even gets to hang out with her friends and help them! That’s not a bad thing~

Definitely sounds like my kinda ride- Like I said, adrenaline junkie. I do wonder about that danger button, though.

Oh, Chris and Shiho! Nice to see them- They seem to be doing pretty alright, too, which definitely doesn’t hurt. Though I will admit that I wasn’t expecting them to be... Friends? As friendly? As they are. No particular reason, just didn’t strike me as an oncoming friendship? I like it, though!

I... Guess Shiho has already worked out how to test it? They’ve been doing it, so it’s to be expected, but it’s still kinda funny, how she just went straight into it. Heh... OH SHIT CHRIS YOUR FINGERS. Poor man... He just wanted Shiho to be safe. And him getting some help going down is definitely a good thing, in my book- Here’s to hoping someone can help him out? Or at least has like, an ice pack or something. Maybe Itsuki is there!

Hotaru, stop being so sadistic, it’s rude. Shiho and Banri... Learn to read the mood better or something. That’s just very poor timing on their parts. At least everyone else cares?

Waiting for Itsuki is definitely a good idea- As was said, we have no idea if his fingers were broken. And I think the tea will help a bit! Asahi’s cool like that... Even if Chris is too embarrassed to say what happened. Poor guy- Don’t think they’d laugh at him... Er. Don’t think most of them would laugh, anyways.

Ah, so this is where our missing students were- Hibiki and Tsukae seem to be working on the swimsuits still, while Daiko, Chihaya, and Nashi seem to be just... Chilling, I guess. At least some of them care about Chris?

Free time event! Wonder what Chris’ll say.

So he likes... Massages, tough foods, fantasy games (DND, maybe), jousting, exercising, and metalworking (Or maybe just general crafting). Huh... He’s certainly got some interesting likes. But now I’m wondering who exactly he serves? Like, is it the queen of England or something? Someone else? Hm.



Asahi and Shion truly are the mom and dad of this group, at least food wise. And as for the carnival food... Well, they’re trying, I think that’s what counts. And also, funnel cake sounds amazing? I want some now. Damnit.

Nashi! He seems decent, all things considered, though I can see where Kichi is coming from with the “He knows to much” or something like that. I do have to wonder if it’s just a mixture of his talent and coincidence, or if he’s connected to the Mastermind in some way... That’d suck, though, I like him.

Chihaya is... Chihaya, I guess, not that surprised by her outburst. Off she goes either way, though.

Time passed quickly, I guess... And yeah, getting to bed before you fall asleep is a good idea, given what the rules say. I’d hate for someone to get punished just because they slept in the wrong area.

Yeah, no, their guts are definitely right, shit’s gonna go down and someone will probably die.

Pajamas? Huh... Can’t say I expected that. It’s nice of Monojoker, but I still wasn’t expecting it. Wonder if anyone else got some sleepwear?

Good luck writing!
~ AnonChan1
Sharkeye chapter 10 . 4/26/2019
ekichirou - as someone with two sisters. neither them to me or vice versa have any of us called each other "sis"

cherika - Ultimate Beatboxer

monojoker - i don't remember this episode of the berenstein bears

christopher - it's only a flesh wound

nashi - fuck. fuck. I can see forever. fffFGFFFfFFuck

gabriel - I'M THE TRASHMAN. I EAT GAAAAAAARBAGE

daiko - this is more a metacommentary than "lol haha funny" but daiko reminds me of dojima from P4 and i like that

genki - he just wants to be with his people

shiho - detroit: become homeless

ayano - all i want is for her to be better. also she kinda just disappears of to itsuki's tent and i know that means nothing but i have anxiety okay
RioA chapter 10 . 4/23/2019
Hello, and I am here again with another review! I have missed some chapters here and there, but I'll try to review this chapter for the sake of me reviewing chapters! I might be shorter in reviewing simply because my energy runs out really quickly, but we'll see. I'll mainly try to focus on Gabe and Chris since they're our highlights, being the FTEs, duh.

Gabe is such a sweet person! It's sad to see that he seems to think of himself as so little, I wonder what happened to him in the past? Anyways, other than that, I'm glad Kichi and Cherry are talking to him. He definitely would need someone with him. We must give everyone friends! I hope he can get along well with the others, though I am sad he's been pushed merely to collecting trash and whatnot. I know that's his talent and his likes/hobbies do strengthen that role of his, but he should work with the others so he'll have friends, aha.

Chris is a sweet knight! I do like him and how confident he tries to portray himself. It makes me sad everytime to see him hurt himself. Geez, he and Cherry needs someway to not get injured every ten seconds or so. And poor Chris for getting his fingers crushed! Geez, I want nothing more than happiness for our knight here. Someone make him happy please, and not hurt actually. Someone needs to take care of him, the sweet boy.

Er, other than those two, we do have a lot of other things to talk about! The first thing that does come to mind is Galiana and Hotaru's interaction- seems like Galiana is responsible in a sense despite her eccentric nature. That's great! I'm still worried over Ayano. I know it might just be her way of comforting herself, her acting normal in a sense and being around others, but I can't help but worry she will bite the bullet. Someone make her happy, please. I do like how Cherry is making friends! She definitely deserves it, the sweetheart. Asahi and Shion continue to be the parental figures of the group, and Daiko somehow continues to wreck my favorites list everytime, that boy.

Also, pajamas! Pajamas are comfortable, aish. Also everyone has like death flags over them, what the hell how dare you Sona.

Thanks for the plug, and I'll see you next time~ ;)
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 10 . 4/23/2019
Great chapter, Persie! I really enjoyed it D The FTEs were interesting, and the mystery of the pyjamas is, well, mysterious D I look forward to the next chapter
Ziggymia123 chapter 10 . 4/22/2019
Man, Chris and Cherry have matching luck, don’t they? I guess that’s where his “Tragic” title comes in. Thugs just don’t go well for him, often at the cost of his own health. I wouldn’t be surprised if he dies in the process of trying to save someone else. Not this chapter, though. I don’t think Chris will die yet.

I’m actually not sure who I think will die first. You have killers be able to kill up to three people instead of the usual two, which makes sense given your cast size, but I doubt you’re going to do anything too crazy number wise for the first case. So probably just the one victim. Is it Ayano? That seems a little obvious given what happened to her family. I want to assume that we’re losing one of the twins, but I think they’ll be the killer for more pain and possible character development. And by they, I mean Kichi. Cherry’s too precious to lose too soon!
AnonChan1 chapter 9 . 4/9/2019
Heya!

I’d almost forgotten about the motive video... Dear lord, poor Ayano. I really hope she isn’t gonna be left alone after that- The poor thing needs some support or comfort or something.

Okay, I get where both of them are coming from- From what I know, their parents are pretty bad people when it comes to their kids, what with using Kichi and neglecting Cherry at the very least. On the other hand, having anyone’s life at risk because of what you may or may not do is... A lot? Like, even if they mistreated you, I’d think it’d be scary, if nothing else. I could be completely wrong, of course, I’ve never been in either situation, but that what I’m thinking.

Well, I’m glad he realized that the others care about their families- And that Ayano just saw her father, who, she loves, get gunned down. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t think Kichi’s a terrible person, but he seemed a bit... Uh, blinded? By his dislike for his family. Not that I can blame him.

Aw... Well, I think they both needed that hug.

Looks like they’re gonna hang out with Genki! This should be interesting- Not much of a planner myself, but I’d imagine doing so after what just happened would be a bit difficult.

I feel kinda bad for Kichi... I mean, he’s stuttering- Which he doesn’t normally do, obviously- His sister is calling his bluff on his attempt to seem stronger for her sake... It’s understandable, of course, it would shake anyone, but I guess I’m just... A bit more used to him being pretty calm? Maybe that isn’t isn’t the right word, but hopefully you get what I mean.

Pool party? I can’t remember if that was mentioned or not- Though I think it was- But not being able to swim would definitely be an issue, so... Not going in the water is probably a good idea.

Guess Genki was expecting them... Or, rather, was expecting them to help? Either way, both parties have convenient timing! And Genki evidently has a kinda fancy way of talking- It fits him, though, even if it’s a little bit confusing. Don’t worry Cherry, I’m with you.

Huh... Looks like he isn’t doing too badly on the planning front- And so soon, too. It also looks like Kichi and Cherry are on decoration duty! Not too bad~

Okay, not gonna lie, I keep forgetting how tall Jun is, but then I remembered, and Hibiki is just. So short. And the image of him kicking her shins irritably is hilarious now. Even if she didn’t notice. Which is arguably EVEN FUNNIER. It’s just great.

Jun just really, really tall, and I keep getting reminded of it. It’s great. Anyways, it sucks that she doesn’t remember what the tent looked like, but I don’t think there’s much to be done about it.

And there it is! Also, there’s a cleaning section? That’s a good thing... Wonder if Gabe’s found it yet.

Well, either way, party supplies have been located! There’s actually a pretty good assortment of stuff... Though they might wanna stay away from those birthday candles, they sound like bad news. Anyways, time to run it all down to the pool area!... Or run into Itsuki, who’s as... Erm, abrasive... As ever. Poor Cherry. She didn’t mean to run into the guy.

Oh, he’s gonna be our first free time event? Nice! So, let’s see... He likes reading, watching (Kid) cartoons, and art- He has something in common with Cherry, which is nice~ And his favorites are... Pitcher in the Nye (Catcher in the Rye?) and... My Mini Horsie: Friendliness is Magic. Which I think is My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, because it’s too clear NOT to be. Not what I expected, but that’s amazing? Though it makes me wonder if he also watches the in-universe equivalent of stuff like Gravity Falls, Steven Universe, Over the Garden Wall... Hm.

Alright, I don’t know if it means anything? Like a sign of possessiveness, or it’s just what he does, but the card called her “My Cherry” and it’s kinda cute, I think. Not a bad thing! Just something I noticed~



I don’t know if I’d say desensitized? It could be a way of coping- Like, something terrible just happened, and they’re either trying to boost morale or give themselves a sense of control over the situation. That isn’t to say that some of them aren’t desensitized, of course, I don’t know what they’ve seen in life, but it is a thought.

The bit about Itsuki is fair, though- Not odd that he’s a bit used to it. And hey, desensitization is hardly a bad think in and of itself!

Well, childlike is hardly a bad thing! Kinda cute, really- And honestly, I don’t think it matters that much, as long as it makes people a bit happier. Hell, not even that- It just has to relax them and calm them down a bit.

Banri and Aki! The former is as hyper as usual- Maybe even more energetic. Those coffee beans couldn’t have helped. The former just seems to be getting stuff done- Not bad progress on her end, really. And I can sympathize with wanting the party to happen after that.

He keeps mentioning the military and I wanna know whether or not that has something to do with his talent! Tell me your secrets, Banri!

Cups and balloons... The balloons will definitely take a while. And Cherry... Poor Cherry is also having issues, it seems. Even Mother Nature can’t give her a break, indeed.

And now Kichi’s jinxed it- Something bad is definitely going to happen that’s reason for worry... I’m hoping the nice atmosphere will last for a bit, though. Everyone trying to help out and seeming relatively content is such a nice change of pace, and I know it won’t hold, but I still want it to, you know?

Looks like their part in the prep is as finished as it can be! It was nice of Kichi to lend Cherry a hand at the end, there. Also, that was a great pun. 10/10, Aki.

Someone checking on Ayano is probably a good idea, given everything... I don’t think they’ve seen her yet.

Not gonna lie, whether or not she’ll even want anyone around is a bit of a tossup, but from what we’ve learned of her, I at least don’t think she’d react too hostilely to an offer of company? Even if she doesn’t accept, the idea that someone’s there for her might help a bit.

Kinda expected it, but she’s... Really not doing well. Talk about a mess- An understandable one, but still.

Ayano free time! Here’s to hoping some comfort will make her feel better... Heh. Yeah, a bit of a weird topic for what’s been happening, but you gotta give the two props for trying! I, personally, don’t really like almonds, but I love cup noodles- A bit too much, really. And! Another person Cherry can draw with! And it’s bonus socialization for Ayano~ Also, Oligopoly... Is definitely Monopoly. Pfft.

Glad to see that they helped cheer her up a bit!



Now to remind her of the party... Here’s to hoping it doesn’t piss her off. That’d suck.

She seems okay with it! I’d say it’s less of a “She’s okay now” thing, and more of a “She’s trying to feel better” thing. She’s undoubtably still a bit shaken at the very least, she’s just trying to heal a bit, if that makes sense. Also, Ayano, I... Wouldn’t call it moping around. Poor thing.

Cleaning up is a good thing! Much easier to live in~ And going to Genki to get something to do is also a good idea- It’ll give her something else to think about.

Guess it’s clean up crew time~



Oh, looks like someone may have found them! Here’s to hoping this isn’t a hope spot or something, it’d suck for their rescue to get murdered right in front of them.

Good luck writing!
~ AnonChan1
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