Oh my gosh, I loved when he tried to flirt with Daisy as Mr. L and was kicked in his area. And him asking her to call him before falling to the ground was funny too. XD Keep up the good work and please update whenever possible!

Nice to see you didn't just make the two Toads generic robbers and even made them feel a little remorseful about robbing people, I had a feeling it was Mimi who helped Luigi out in the previous chapter and can't wait to see how Luigi and Daisy react to finding out Peach and Mario are going to have a kid/kids.

Nice introduction to Mimi and Luigi's reunion. I still have to wonder about Luigi's status when facing his alternate identity. To hear about Mario and Peach becoming parents, that's quite a nice surprise for them. But I wonder when either one finds out about the incident with Mr. L and Daisy. Another interesting chapter here, great job!

~TGN

Great job! Luigi is going to be a Uncle!

I'm liking this so far, I loved the cameo of Goombario (he has to be the goomba in the blue cap) being mugged and being the 1st citizen MR.L saves from two toad thugs. I have a feeling I know who this mystery person is but I'll hold off on guessing who it is until I find out more about her. Can't wait to see MR.L the vigilante in action later on and how Daisy plays into this since going by the names on the summary she's playing a big part in this story.

Great job! This story is interesting

This is a very interesting start. Albeit the chapter title made Mr. L's return very expected rather than surprising, the scenes following that added some suspense on how things take a twist. As for the final cutscene, I have a good idea who the mystery person is, but I'll keep it to myself in case I'm right and spoil it for others. I would like to see how this story will unfold. Great job so far!

~TheGameNguyener (TGN)