That was freaking retarded.

love it

This is really a good story been reading this for a while now ..and just can't wait for the attack on Beacon and I hope Pyrrah doesn't die plss do so and some good ass Nicol Bills Vs Grimm Dragon would be nice ..just pls ..don't kill off Pyrrah

not gonna lie its pretty barebones and a bit bland. why the hell does the Deathstalker show up when noone got into that cave.

Pretty sweet introspection and good dialogues, can't wait for next events. Hoping you're safe and good work.

Okay not gonna lie the last line got me, but not for the usual reasons, part way through I thought, “I could imagine this being Liliana, and some of the possible outcomes of that meeting” and then bam the last line hits me and I called it XD well done

How does this story not have more favs.

so glad to see a new chapter, i enjoyed this one a lot, can't wait to see the next :D

Love the story take your time and keep up the good work

Thanks for the fic, please dont judge untill read to the end author-sama. Its a good concept though i don't think you should have given up the secret that he is half dragon and can do magic so early into the story especially to his parent who he has a bitter relationship with. It kinda ruins what I think IMO is the best thing in this story; choice, the ability to chose your actions and in-turn your fate even if its against half of your soul was really what got me into this story. Which is why story up to chapter 4 was so good. Its just feels abit of a let down that 'the reveal' that he is dragon and can use magic is taken out of his hands with something as mundane as a unnecessary reaction that has almost no impact aside from a power jerkoff to his family. Also noticed that Jaune was taught alchemy cause his soul was so pure but a lot of his actions and motives after he joins beacon are rather corruptive. I can understand that he has a evil dragon as his other half but would have loved if he could be a bit more knightly, like the heroes he admired as a child growing up. I'm not saying he shouldn't have negative impulses but rather fundemental principles that guide his actions and who he is. I hope you don't take this review the wrong way I do like the story & writing and hope that this honesty can be used positive constructive manner.

this is getting awesome. can't wait for the next part. I wonder if pyrrha will have a spark. guess we will see.

Awesome! So glad this fic continued!

Well I mean, it's not like she's a real threat if you're willing to go "ooops, I collapsed a plane of existence with my sheer presence" on her.

love it

Huh, thought this was dead.