"Well, my uncle isn't here…" Lloyd said. "So maybe we can put that off until tomorrow and just go home now."

"Those were truly wise words, Master Lloyd." Kai placed a hand on his little brother's shoulders.

That is LEGIT the BEST quote I have EVER read, in. My. LIFE! I laughed so hard. And then Lloyd was addressed as Kai’s younger brother and, just, YAS!

This such an amazing story, I stayed up till past midnight reading it! And yes, I am tired. And no, I’m not going to bed yet () cuz I still have stuff to do *coughcoughreadmorestoriescoughcough*. (I feel like that sentence sums me up pretty well)

Please continue

I love withering heights! I stopped reading this, but now I’ve caught up!

THIS is how you do redeem a character! I love this fic so much! it has everything I love in a Ninjago fanfic: Lloyd and Harumi apologizing to each other, Harumi being treated right, No Dareth ,etc.
I especially love how you had Ed and Edna bond with Harumi and how Edna would find it in herself to give Harumi what she needed all along: a shoulder to cry on. I'm sure they will be able to help her! I'm looking foward for more EdnaHarumi bonding!.

I'd for sure be interested in one-shots set after this story. :-) Actually, maybe you could also write a one-shot or two set /during/ this story - e.g. one about Harumi questioning her decision to bring back Garmadon ...
And I've been right about the Hoarcrux! :-D
Aww, beautiful scene with the ninja! And yay, PIXAL and Skylor join the team! :-D I like the idea of Wu and Garmadon bringing peace to the First Realm.
Just gotta love Edna! :-D That conversation at the end was just awesome. :-)
So yeah, a great story that ties up many loose ends from the show. This is how Season 9 should have been. :-)

Garmadon having put his element into the Colossus reminds me of the Horcruxes in Harry Potter. I like how Lloyd destroys the giant just with his mind.
Aww, so many happy couples here. :-) Ohh, Nya gets her own /real/ dragon! Just like Sensei Wu predicted in ... Episode 1, I believe. :-)
So good that in your story, Airjitzu still exists. :-)
And so good to see that again, Garmadon gets redeemed. :-) Three cheers for teamwork! ;-)
"Balance is the key", as Sensei Garmadon said so long ago. Very wise words, actually.

Nya probably remembers Ronin's betrayal all too well, so no wonder she was skeptical about Harumi.
Yay, now Harumi and Nya are fighting side by side. :-)
I like the idea that only a power from the First Realm can destroy the masks. Then it makes sense that they weren't destroyed as a safety measure in Season 8.
I liked your actions scenes here /way/ better than the ones in S9, seriously. :-) And I like how Lloyd does not need to fight his battle all on his own, but receives help from Wu and Skylor. ;-)

I like Harumi, too. :-) Her parents really are Harumi's weak spot. Good choice, Harumi! :-)
Hehe, 'NinjaPlex' is hilarious. ;-)
Yay, Edna knows how to fight! ;-) Wow, and even more importantly, she apparently knows how to persuade enemies to change sides ... that was lovely flashback scene. I especially like the line about love growing bigger the more you share it. So true. :-) I also like the explanation for why Harumi brought back only Lord Garmadon's evil side. From her point of view, it makes a lot of sense.

There is a 2019 Ninjago Special?! Not sure whether I should be excited or worried about that ... _
Oh, I can see why this is your favorite chapter. Man, that scene between Lloyd, Harumi and Nya is so beautifully executed. Great lines, especially for Harumi and Nya. Hmm, but I'm not sure Nya would really leave that readily at Lloyd's command. _
And the scene with Lloyd and Harumi is even better! :-) Man, so good to see some character development for Harumi. It's such a shame her potential was wasted in the show.

Oh yeah, I can absolutely picture Edna making up for her days of silence. Aww, and this time it's Ed who takes the notes. Love how you portray the Walkers here. :-)
Huh, I've never thought about it, but it makes sense that the falcon needs to be regularly recharged.
Aww, poor Lloyd remembering Sensei Garmadon. :-( And no "living happily ever after" for Lloyd?! T_T
Heh, I like messing with stereotypes. ;-)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHY COULDN'T THIS HAPPEN IN THE SHOW!? THIS ENDING IS ONLY ABOUT A 1000000 TIMES BETTER! *SPAMS that like button like a mad person* lego should just let us write the ninjago seasons, we (especially you) make it 1000 more interesting! :3
Ps: AHDURJRFHRN IT'S JUST SO GOOD
~Masters of Fire and Amber

OMG! I went out of town so I couldn't review the other chapters sorry

BUT OMG?! THIS WAS SO GOOD AHHHH! Oh man I love that you made Jay Harumi's big brother now?! Like? I never thought of that and that's just so adorable ahhhh Are you going to be writing more of this? Because if you do, it would be amazing!

sdjfsojd I'm still not over it ahhh I love it Great job with this story!

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Home? As in... 1st realm? OK that is a great idea fpr them!
Man, that ending was as good as the actual season's ending! All the cute bits with the couples and Zane and PIXAL's being so different from the others, specially for them and that was so brilliant! :)
And how it ended as well, this is a really good season 9 AU and I have enjoyed reading it so much! Great story

I'm not great at writing fight scenes either. But this was good snd I do like this new take on Lloyd's powers
And that's right, Ninjago never quits :)