Reviews for If You Want Me
vapourtrailreads chapter 1 . 9/17/2018
i love it sm im crying uwu fhsfjkdsfjksa :''
XYZArtemis chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
Lovely job!
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Fantastic.
Love Queenie trying to reassure her sister, but Tina stops her because she doesn't want to hear it from anyone but Newt. And how after her walk in the rain, she is determined to do just that.
And while she's off in the rain, Queenie's down in the case trying to help Newt do the right thing. Love how after she's gone, he simply tells Jacob to go get the waste paper basket. But like Tina, he wants to hear what's going on directly from Newt.
I love that Tina arrived to fit Newt in the sitting room, and how Newt's first reaction was to help her because she was soaking wet. And it's only after he admits he wants to make things up to her that she allows him to help.
LOVE LOVE LOVE how after Tina's sees the letters and had decided that that's all she needs to know at the moment, Newt stops her. And then they talk about why their scared, but that they want to pursue this relationship. Love that Tina had two conditions. And there was kissing!
I can hear the voices so clearly in your stories, especially Newt and Queenie and that's actually pretty rare for me unless it's a direct quote. And the points about the Brits vs. Yanks vernacular and the 'thank Morrigan' about the silencing spell on Queenie's room.
HerefortheNewtina chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
I love your writing! This was the perfect mix of angst and fluff! Just. Yes.
civilwarrose chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Aww, this was really sweet! Loved it! :)
roseokwerekwu chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
awww, I thoroughly enjoyed it
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Beautiful.
You captured the emotion really well... I even teared up at the end.