i just wanted to say that i really enjoy your writing and how you write monika 3

"Can you also attack a camera?"

This chapter was just as brilliant as the others, keep it up! In fact, I would love to read how this continues. Btw I really do like these more dark and philosophical chapters, I enjoy them.

I really enjoyed how Monika’s emotions weren’t just in love hunky dory and confident. She was more realistic being nervous on dates, crying out when she couldn’t take the fake reality and lots of other emotions that make her much more relatable and likable to read about.

This is great! I do prefer Yuri over Monika, but she is definitely a close second! It was great how you captured Monika and her feelings. I can’t wait to read more!