Loved the mentioning of "El Kabong" from the old Quick Draw McDraw cartoon. :)

I wonder what real life would be if Marvel actually decided to make a rock n' roll themed super hero? Or better yet contact you and ask your permission to make Kid Razor an actual Marvel comics character, that would be totally wicked!

I felt like cracking up at the line

"That mystical energy! It must hurt him badly, like he has a weakness to it!" Reed realized.

It reminded me of the old comics(and some of the modern) where all the super heroes stated the obvious XD

Well I can't review the last chapter again so just to wrap up your story... WICKED! Kid Razor is awesome cocky, perverted, and loud, but pretty cool. Also his joke about cyke is too true. I wish as a joke you have a one shot dedicated to one thing: Cyclops torture! Possibly Scott being dressed as a girl?

Jack of Hearts:Jack was able to generate bursts of energy in the form of concussive force, intense heat, or propelling force that enabled him to fly. He was also capable of absorbing energy from other sources. He possessed superhuman levels of healing and endurance and could survive unprotected in space. Although he only had normal intelligence, his thinking capacity was enhanced by a scanning device which gave his thought processes the speed and efficiency of a highly advanced computer. Jack also had superhuman strength.

Real name:Jonathan Hart

Copied that from Marvel. So I don not own it all. No copyright intended ;)

Wow, Kid Razor sure is cocky. I feel so bad for Ronnie Rocker. Poor guy didn't know his protege would be that impatient. *sigh* Oh well, it doesn't matter that he's cocky as long as he kicks butt and Ronnie Rocker appears( he's one of my favorite charcters right now) I'm happy. Also wicked intro, any super hero that kicks a jerk in disguise as a cop's butt is a friend of mine!

Love your story. I also like your description on the bands music. I've heard of Styx but never got to listen to them, but Aerosmith rocks, and the lyrics are amazing! But I prefer AC/DC more ever since their song TNT came out. But going back to praise now. I like your characters a lot. I would love to get to actually get to know them if they existed. Wicked job, keep it up! ;)

Wonderful story! I just don't like Jubilee:( She is just a bit to perky and I'm not a fan of that. But love your character Kid he and cyclops battle it out, with Razor whipping his butt up and down the street!

It's a GREAT story, and Kid Razor is definately one of my favorite heroes (official or unofficial) now, but, and it's probably just me, the whole part of Razor replacing Bobby in the band... It kinda seems like it needs a little bit more to it. Why would someone like Bobby, whose music is his life, suddenly leave the band? (If the band knew that he was Razor, that'd be one thing, but you've made it clear they don't) And in the same line, I know Razor is the new hometown hero and all, but why would the Firecrackers just take him in as their new lead and change their name?

Very good with the characters and their lines.

damn, this was a good story to read.

Now that, was fun...

Although I didn't know who some of the villians were, this is gonna be a good story.

I might suggest, like i did last time, that, in the next story, set up the scene a bit, with things like multiple floors, glass windows, manequinns in windows, fountains, you know, the normal things you find in malls. Or wherever they're fighting.

This is gonna be good...

That was a well done chapter, and I like the touch with the villian... who might it be, I wonder.

This was a good opening chapter.

I have one suggestion for your combat scenes. When the robbers attacked Kid, I was sort of left wondering where they were coming from. did any have to go around desks? Around the teller's counter? Maybe one was across the room and took a bit of time to reach Kid. If you stagger them by making them go around obsticles, Kid could, say, throw one into a second one just reaching him, or throw one over the teller's counter. Maybe kick one so it just skimmed the top of one of the desks.

Dude, you suck at picking names for your villains. No offense, but... Xantor and Black Queen? Not exactly origianal and amazing. Can't wait to read the sequel.