Good story.

The concept of a soul being split because of a murder is a bit weird. The idea that it can attach itself to random objects is even weirder. Attaching itself to a person with another soul already in residence is mind boggling.

All at random without any rituals.

I have issues with the idea as you can tell. Whatever is in Harry's scar really can't be a horcrux without violating the few magic rules some people have placed in the stories. logic, too.

If it was so easy to set up a horcrux, how many are there in this world? Millions. Any murder anywhere would generate one. They'd be attached to bed sheets, doorknobs. Crickets and beetles. They'd be everywhere you go.

Harry must be a special circumstance passed whats mentioned in the stories...or its not a horcrux, not really.

In any case, I enjoy your stories.

bonne fic!

Bills awesome!

Draco at this point is innocent this makes bill just as evil as Lucius.

Bill Weasley is terrifying here

Yeah! More great stuff. Thanks so much

6 older brothers here. I was most definitely a wallflower. Had I found myself with such a diary at 11, I would not likely have told anyone. My shyness was extremely crippling and was mainly caused by my brothers constant bravado. As much as I mostly dislike Ginny, I get her. But the story was great. Go Bill!

Fair play, honesty etc only work with those who believe the same. With crooks and the rest who deal unfairly, fair play works against you. Good on Bill Weasley for playing by Death Eater rules.

*whistles* That's not a good buy playing fair, that's a good guy playing by the other side's playbook (as seen in modern US politics, Alinsky's ideas work both ways if conservatives and libertarians have the fortitude to use them).

Perfect revenge!

Finally - a strong willed good guy seeking justice, and not a weak willed doormat! And also yeah for a Ginny that is more realistic. I always thought the book version of her was a tad off - but I hated the movie version. It put me off as Harry's love interest! But, since I am nearly 60, perhaps that has something to do with it... ;)

I find it more likely that Narcissa was a deliberately ignorant Dark supporter (in other words, she likely had no idea what the Diary was or that her husband sent it to the school) - I don't know if that would change how Bill would behave but I think that would make her more of a loose canon under pressure (see her canon behavior), rather than someone who follows orders. And what would that mean with her child under deadly threat? Well, Bill kept reminding her that he had an 11 year old sister, for one thing. Food for thought.

Ruthless, vengeful Bill is a very entertaining Bill.

Bill - or rather is actor - was of course an evil side kick in the Star Wars new films.

Nice, oh well played Bill was not nice here but you know what, it was a revenge well played out.