| Reviews for The Devices and Machinations of Lisa Loud |
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   1281281812309 chapter 11 . 4/14/2019 So happy and excited to see this series continue, especially with a chapter like this. You capture the friendship between Lisa and Darcy so well, and I can't wait to see where this goes. |
| Hatoralo chapter 11 . 4/14/2019 Please Lisa, don't turn friendship into an economy. |
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 11 . 4/14/2019 Very interesting, even if I'm not sure what this device is meant to do. |
| Omni Spectator chapter 10 . 7/5/2018 Good for Lincoln. Let's hope the next gizmo Lisa makes doesn't runt the risk of complete molecular destruction. |
| Hatoralo chapter 10 . 7/5/2018 Interesting... To be honest it came to me across as an addiction like a drug. So, the ending was kind of weaker for me because it got into a different direction. |
| Perfectlove990 chapter 10 . 7/5/2018 I love these collections of two shots that you have written. Also I'm interested in the new story you'll be writing. Also an idea I have for a chapter is a what if machine, inspired by Futurama |
| celrock chapter 10 . 7/5/2018 Loved this chapter and I'm glad Lincoln learned the importance of family. Keep up the great writing, looking forward to checking out your new story, whenever it becomes available! |
| DreadedCandiru2 chapter 10 . 7/5/2018 [French Narrator Voice From Spongebob]"Lincoln has learned a valuable lesson: "If you want something...ASK!" |
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 10 . 7/5/2018 Very awesome, loving it. Never tried VR gaming myself, you? |
| Omni Spectator chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 Ok, first off: WHAT Second: THE F### Third: LISA!? That is not a virtual reality system. That is F###ing Tron! Next time you try and make something like this, just watch StarTrek and copy the Holodeck! As for the chapter, great job! |
| celrock chapter 9 . 6/20/2018 Great chapter. Keep up the great writing! |
| classicfilmfan chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 So Lisa invented the Oasis before James Halliday even conceived of it. I'd like to see an experiment with the Ageswap AU like the one seen in Rakanadyo's Flip the Lid. |
| DreadedCandiru2 chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 Ah. They always said that the Holodeck would be the last invention. Someone's about to prove that... |
| LoudAutomata16 chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 Damn you, Numeral. I was about to go to sleep, when I found that this story updated. And you know I have to get on this sci-fi Lisa goodness as soon as possible... I liked the little interactions Lincoln had with his sisters (especially him and Lynn, but I guess I'm beyond biased at this point) and the gag of Lincoln narrating and others noticing is a classic I always love seeing/using. And, while I could be wrong, I think you are trying to look at video game addiction with this part of the story, which is very interesting. And finally... nice call back to the Mad Scientist episode. |
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 Interesting idea here, my friend. |
