interesting story, no idea if you plan to keep going but I hope you do.

this is a wery good story please continue this

I did find some spelling errors. I think that the name is a bit to feminine and dull, I’ve noticed that most purebloods give there kids complex names like nymphydora or regulus or Draconis. Everything else is good. And I think it definitely has a future. It’s amazing

I'm wondering how Lyra is related to voldemort. Hope you will update soin your wonderful story !

great story hoping you keep working on it. it flows well and the perspective is captivating. hope you updated soon

There are a lot of language errors, such as forgetting a word and writing the sentence incorrectly. I'm assuming English isn't you first language so getting a beta would be useful. Overall, story is good and original but the translation errors detract from it.

Oh, this is very promising! I like the name Alya on Harry. It's... a unique name, for a boy. I hope to see more of this story!

I love this story. this chapter is very interessing. Harry is so cute like that. Regulus Black is maybe his father or Rabastan and Rodolphus' brother or James Potter's brother? Harry's first name is a little feminized but it's a pretty name. Good work!

oh what fun!

Love it like harry new name hope harry helps this harry out nd like to see how harry fixes tom love to see cain pop in

I can't wait to see what Alya decides to do. Hopefully he plans to ensure that alternate Harry isn't the tool he was in his past life. Something tells me that the Weasley's and others who betrayed him will not have it so good this time around. Hopefully you continue this since I haven't found many going back in time fics where Harry isn't in it to save everyone. This will be fun.

awesome

Brilliant!

I think there’s a great future for this story!