Oh my God... *shivers*... Whitebeard was OOC as FUCK! The story was uh.. Cringe? That's all I can say... But for some fucking reason I could not stop reading... Fuck!

Marco should have healed instantly by changing to his phoenix form. Unless he is beaten half dead while wearing Kairoseki chains

OMG! This has so much potential! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it!

Woohoo plot development! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well this chapter escalated things unexpectedly quickly in both plot & the relationship between Ace & Fina. I thought she was a sort of witch who could use magic but needed the gem to increase her power. Instead she's a phoenix like Marco. A witch or mage would've been better in my opinion. Just a thought. I'm looking forward to reading what happens to the creep and the relationship between Ace & Fina.

If she is literally fire of course she would be scared of water. As for rhe gem it must be a part of herself in gem form...

I wanna read more of this and see what happens between Fina & Ace.

You made a mistake in having the crew refer to Fina as a girl while she was sparring with Kato lol.

Interesting story and chapter I can't wait for more thanks for updating and please if you can continue to make the chapters long. Good luck until the next chapter.

the gem is obviously something very important to Fina, so it makes sense that it comes up often in the story but I can see it coming up less and less as she spends more time with the crew, leading me to believe it's taking the back burner to the pirates. I'm so excited to know what happens next and figure out what this gem really is!

ah ah ah ah ! xD you made me laugh !

this is written so well, I absolutely adore Fina and can't wait to see what happens! I really look forward to the next chapter!

Oooooooo! Getting interesting! Please update soon!