He could've just said "I swear it", you know. No need to make your word count that much more. Like what the zeus.

Ugh...

I'm pretty sure that Phoebe is a daughter of Ares

Chiron is guilty of treason against Olympus.

Just fuck off the son of hestia can't even make everyone calm down even though in the books it is said and shown that just being close to hestia can make any demigod feel relaxed and at home. Hell i think she could calm down her brothers even, so why can't Percy just calm Phoebe down? It does not make sense.

I have read this story a lot and I am really sad that you just end it like that. I think you should at least do the chapter where artemis is freed. Keep up the good work!

more, more I beg of you!

the way they warm up to each other is showing how you can do story/character/relationship development

I like it, also because it makes more sense. Atalanta never wanted to marry because she wanted to always hunt

Update soon please

Update please

I have read and re-read this story numerous times, and everytime I finish, I get really disappointed because it's discontinued.

Perzoe is already pretty rare as is, but a good one? Besides Anaklusmos' Destinies series, this is definitely my favorite Perzoe story.

The chemistry that you have for the characters is actually plausible and realistic. Seeing Zoe's internal struggles between the hunt and Percy isn't as touched upon with other works; they usually give an easy outing where there's nothing that really goes wrong. But here we see more on what she's giving up if she were to leave and her conflictions because of her growing feelings for Percy as this is a very foreign subject to her.

Though I see Percy's character as too... perfect. He's been training ever since he met Hestia, I can understand this. However, it also kinda seems to me like he was still sheltered from much of the world. Because of this, it would make sense that he is a little bit childish and very innocent. Now, maybe it's because you haven't written far enough yet but I don't really see a change in Percy's overall character at all. He's learned a little and he's intelligent so there's something to keep him going but other than improving or building relationships with the other characters, he acts exactly the same as in chapter 1.

Overall, this is a fantastic story that I would love to see be continued, very minimal "faults", and pretty damn well written. Hope you come back to this!

This was a fantastic read well done

I love this story- SO MUCH! I just adore the idea of the adoption part on percy's end- and just the way you perfectly altered the plot is great! I think your writing skills are great. :D

I really like the Perzoë progression. Realistic, natural feeling relationships, romantic or otherwise, are rather rare in this fandom. This is a pretty good example of one.

Percy is a pretty neat character in this fic, too, but morally he might be a little too perfect. Dunno.