Reviews for Temptress (Roxanne)
Luhh Vieira chapter 10 . 9/11/2019
I have been reading many of your megamind fanfics these last few days. I really like them. I like your voice for them and the pace of the stories. I really liked this one special.
I couldn't give them kudos like on AO3 so I wanted to at least say it here, on this review.
I hope you continue with the incomplete ones, I would love to read more.
multyfangirl21 chapter 10 . 8/9/2018
Can we get a sequel? I love this story.
Ardina Falconhurst chapter 10 . 2/28/2018
Yay! A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing so much with us this month! It was all so great! I again wish you a wonderful year of...however many years old you are...hope it's the best yet.
BookWormGirl93 chapter 10 . 2/28/2018
awww that was lovely!
Tierra y Libertad chapter 9 . 2/27/2018
This chapter was awesome! I am happy there are more updates for this story, because I loved it! Seeing things from Roxanne's perspective is amazing, especially as she has a very complex story on this story. I was feeling really sad for her, so I am super glad things cleared up! You are the master of hurt/comfort, Set!
Katieghost chapter 9 . 2/27/2018
I love this story so much! it's one of my favorites of yours. and I also love the way you can keep coming up with cute scenarios for these two to get together! :3 I just love reading your stories in general, threy make me feel so happy. :D
amythestblade chapter 9 . 2/26/2018
*gasp* To be continued, really? Fantastic! I had thought for sure this was the end of the story once it caught up to the other one.
Ardina Falconhurst chapter 9 . 2/26/2018
This was great! We saw Roxanne go from the lowest lows, thinking of ways to end it all, to the highest level of happiness we've seen yet. It was great, you conveyed her feelings beautifully!
Also, I agree with TheSUNiswarmingup's review below. You're a Super fanfic author, because of PRESENTATION! Stay awesome Set!
BookWormGirl93 chapter 9 . 2/26/2018
awww cute! love it!
TheSUNiswarmingup chapter 8 . 2/25/2018
Set, I love this story so much; it's one of your very, very best.

For a while, it seemed to me that you had lost interest in this fandom, and that was sad; I never guessed you were preparing stories for 28 consecutive release dates! The difference between a fanfic author and a SUPER one? PRESENTATION!
Ardina Falconhurst chapter 8 . 2/25/2018
This was a great chapter! I absolutely loved her bit of journalism and the revenge against the terrible teacher! Great job :)
Her fear is building, she's so terrified her pheromones may be affecting him...she'd never think someone would want her. But these scenes you've painted, they're slowly taking down the walls and it's great. Her caring for him the only way she could when he got hurt. His understanding why she does things. I'm looking forward to more! Stay awesome Set
joanhello chapter 8 . 2/25/2018
I love that line! "help I've fallen in love with my nemesis and I can't get up"

And I love Roxanne working as a reporter, keeping herself carefully out of it, and then Megamind figuring out it was her anyway. I love that the citizens love him.

And her committing crimes that please him (like, no, this isn't a perverse kind of courtship vaguely equivalent to repeatedly kidnapping him, not at all) and then she saves his life (!) and then they have that bonding experience on the roof, and talk about a reset button no less, and I just asregssftd!

This also makes me wonder whether, in this 'verse, Megamind has also has the experience of being held prisoner in a lab where he wasn't treated well, so that he understands why she did what she did to escape. I wonder whether he looked at the records from her first captivity and understood the cruelty implicit in them.
joanhello chapter 7 . 2/25/2018
Wow. The same kitchen wallpaper. Did he find a few leftover rolls of the paper in the library attic and steal them? Or did he photograph the pattern and reproduce it?

I bet Psycho figured he could jump her easily because she was naive enough to agree to a meeting in an enclosed space. Two villains with airborne powers should of course have met on a very high rooftop where the wind would disarm them. But how did he communicate with her, given that she works alone and is not really part of the criminal underworld?

Oh, duh. Through her fence. She had to sell that stolen jewelry to somebody, and Psycho could find out who that somebody was without too much trouble.

But how could he have guessed that she would be triggered by being called beautiful? If it weren't for lack of that one datum, he would have had her.

Thank you for sparing us the scolding and guilt-tripping she got from the cops and/or Metro Man. I can see him being the one who delivered it. Did she even realize that it's purpose was to get her to confess so they could skip the trial?

Finally, I'm impressed with her control and acting ability, pulling the maniacal laughter when she realizes that he cares and actually feels sorry for her.
joanhello chapter 6 . 2/25/2018
Ah, the tough, supervillainous exterior and the tender, vulnerable exterior. She's still a teenager, isn't she? Lots of teen heroes out there but not too many teen villains.

I also like the fact that their battles with each other have upped both their ratings. They were, in a sense, good for each other. It also means that he will not necessarily be in any hurry to put an end to her career.

And I have to say that this is the tenderest apprehension scene ever.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/24/2018
That's so sweet! Also, very much in character with canon Megamind's behaviour. It's amazing how you can write something which is so much different from canon, plot-wise, and still keep the characters in character!
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