Man this was great.

I like your Flamel. He really feels like an ancient. So full of experience. Open to sharing wisdom, yet also has no desire to control those around him.

Ardy: And that explains yet more questions, well constructed so far.

Ardy: Ah that explains it sorry.

Ardy: Trying to figure out which Spheres are Harrys or is this just Vampire the Masquerade and not Mage?

PLEASE tell me Harry won't turn into a guilt-ridden goodie-two-shoe like dumbles!

I love the World of Darkness BECAUSE it is Dark. It is real. It's the shadow side of life, but without the unrealistic overkill comic book villains have.

And Dark Harry is brilliant, truly. It would be sad to see him fall to idiotic, naive morality like dumbledore did. (Although I strongly suspect he was always an ideologic fool, thinking wizards should rule muggles was -actually- to help the muggles since they clearly can't take care of themselves and was so low beneath wizards. If you look closely, he still treats muggles with that exact arrogance, but more like an animal activist now than a dictator wannabe.)

Loving this story please update.

great its nice

great

Far far better than the last version. Harry is still an edge lord. You also once again made him really old and yet still dumb. Oh well. This one is worth reading at least.

Fuck you, Dumbledore! If you really cared, you would get off your bony ass from that golden throne in Hogwarts and ended Voldemort yourself instead of sending children at him.

I was with you until the whole Harry is a ghoul thing. best of luck with the rest of the story

Well, this chapter just ruined the potential of story. Ugh, thick with light-sided redemption. It would've been glorious for Harry to fall ever so more into the darkness. To kill a monster, become a monster. Afterwards there'll eventually be a hero whom will kill you. But before you go out, enjoy the world to the absolute limit, without any limitations of morality and whatever else!

The realism is quite praiseworthy. I quite like the little touches, such as the radio, and the French using Franc instead of Euros. The racial slurs were also quite on point, even to this day the French do so love to insult any none Francophone as so. Vulgar people. Regardless, it's quite unfortunate that your Harry couldn't be darker. A bit of evil never hurt characterisation - alas!

I am not sure if wand magic is something "worthwhile".