I kinda feel like Veronica’s a little too OOC cuz if Archie called Betty fat she probs wouldn’t let it go so fast

I'm afraid to tell you, if you didn't know, that this story of yours, "Love Quadruple", goes against the policy of this site. This site states in its list of works it won't allow based on other authors or publishers, "FanFiction respects the expressed wishes of the following authors/publishers and will not archive entries based on their work: Anne Rice, Archie comics[…]". If you really have to have this story up on the net, then upload it to DeviantArt or ArchiveofOurOwn or another site. So be a good lamb and delete this story from this site, or I will go on and tell someone who I know will take it down.

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Good

beautiful story truly a work of art

Liked it, but thought you portrayed Archie as too insensitve

omg. I was so scared he would put the gun in the locker

wow amazing

you could have just end it with reggie and betty getting married and jughead as reggie best man and v as betty maid of honor and archie with a new girl that love him and he love her and miss pain in the butt all alone think what have she done nobody wont her any more the end happy ending

the only people that are go hat you are all the one that didn't come to the line when cupids where telling every body how to fine true love

sucked my butt I am loving these storys

so where can I see this pic how do I get to your homepage

Me again, the ending was so amazing and the feelings were portrayed so well I couldn't help but also feel them. It is obvious that you worked hard and you are very skilled. You have the abilities and capabilities of an amazing author.

Hello, I know that the writing styles of many authors are very different. Especially on different sites. Take and Wattpad for example. While the writing styles of authors here are much more professional, sophisticated and have much less errors than those on Wattpad (you are no exception to the superiority of this site) I cannot help but notice though, it is vastly obvious that you wrote this in separate times. A writer should do it as less obvious as possible. It seems like a whole scene just played in your head but you didn't bother to write it. Still great and amazing though.

You have a very good story there is one thing I can not get that is the way you have archie parent reaction to his is the way I see this going the archie furnnel fred andrews was in the front could tell he had been up all night and had been andrews had been crying ever since she learned of her son was siting in the chair rocking rocking back and under beath "My son my only son."Then both parents are hear wispers from people turn see archies so called both parents stood up a stormed toward the was the first to speak "What the hell are you doing here!You turned on my son and stab him in the back!"Betty stepped forward and said "Mrs An- betty was cut off by mrs andrews slapped betty so was knocked to the body was shocked Mrs Andrews "MY SON IS DEAD BECAUSE YOU NO GOOD SLUT !"Betty who is now of a sudden the sounds of a now look to see fred andrews fighting both reggie and one knew fred could fight but there he was he was beating the daylights out of reggie and took five men to restrain fred smack sound this time mrs andrews slapped veronnica .A short time later after being told to stay away from their sons grave.2 years later the andrews moved one knows were they moved to. Then came the death of jughead who was hit by freight train while walking on the police are still are still looking into this point is most parents wound not act like they did in your when their only son was takin from than that is a good story.