At last! I arrived!

I was having a terrible day and seeing this lifted my spirits up! And it was long!

Now that's more like it, more closure for the characters and a nice touch towards the end. Chariot and Akko were trying to rationalize the situation the best they could, but their feelings are too strong to go and just pretend their relationship isn't there, making the point of the whole theme of the dilemma popping up again on Chariot's part. There was a nice resolution of Diana's subplot, I could see how you might consider it flawed, but aside of it, I liked how she noticed Akko's changes after all the events, as well as her talk with Hannah and Barbara. Plus, the whole little irony she found an outlet for her worries on Chariot. It was a lovely talk between Croix and Chariot too.

Congrats! It's completed!

I'm glad you're doing ok! Hopefully, things get going like that and get better for you.

As for Harem, why, of course we would like it to see it continued. That was the fic that started everything after all lol. I also second that suggestion the other reader made about trying a more M fic someday when you have the chance, that is.

Keep it going, you have been improving greatly over the months. And thank you so much for sharing your works with us.

I honestly expected Diana to rape her or something. Just saying, her determination was.. something else. I thought the previous chapter was the last, so I actually didn’t expect to find a new one. I’m glad, and I hope for more chapters!

Dang, didn't expect the epilogue to be so long; the best type of surprise! Another solid piece of writing, very well done. Your descriptions were spot on here, you did an amazing job coloring the environment and providing a solid image of them. Motion was also written very well, very easy to visualize what was going on. You also did a great job of relaying everyone's thoughts. Their streams of consciousness were well written and realistic. My only two complaints were that some of the dialogue was a bit cheesy at times, and that the final section of the epilogue was a tad confusing. Great otherwise; keep up the momentum and continue writing! Getting into a flow like this only makes your ideas come out smoother and better!

-Your Intelligence.

Yes! Finaly! Большое спасибо Автор! Great hail to the Author! And yes, I really hope for the continuation of "Harem". I would like to see Diana and the Chariot share their love for Akko.

It's...over?

The fact that both Chariot and Akko living their secret romance throughout their stay at Luna Nova could've made for a really nice, long fanfiction, I can''t quite seem to believe that you've chosen to end this story now with all the potential that it held.

Still - the reducing fanbase since the anime ended in combination with the quite complicated theme of this fanfiction makes it understandable. And even then - you managed to put in quite a fitting ending that I was satisfied with.

This Epilogue chapter really presented the main headline of the story - Chariot's Dilemma. Still - it left much to the imagination in regards to where the two will go from here. I'm still not sure about this whole "delete their memories / reverse time" magic thing but it was still nicely done.

As this Anime is an original creation and not based off a Light Novel or a Manga, the decision to make a second season will be purely up to Studio Trigger but considering their latest way of handling Darling in the Franxx, I believe that Little Witch Academia is good just the way it is currently.

As for the banishment ending - I don't believe that it's an unhappy ending just as I don't believe that what you've currently done can be considered a "happy ending". It could've allowed you to draw out the story for as long as you wanted until a big climax causes the secret romance to be found out. A banishment ending would seem a little bit more realistic and down to earth, showing that "prohibited" dealings have consequences but even still - it would allow Chariot and Akko to pursue their romance even if they're outcasts as opposed to now - where they're forced to put their romance on hold until Akko's graduation.

I think that Akko will be content with the banishment ending, as she even specified that in this chapter, when she suggested that the two of them "leave Luna Nova and go on a big adventure". I think that it will suit the outline of her character and her personality as someone who knows that a great witch isn't necessarily supposed to be acknowledged and raised by the system to be one.

Still, a great fanfiction with a great author, I'm glad that I got the chance to read the chapters that you've written. If you're ever down to write a sequel or really just an alternate version in the future, know that I will be there to read it.

Best Regards,

Carameleo.

This is a good story

So wait, did Croix stole Chariot's first kiss and then changed the timeline? Or just created an alternate one where she gets with Chariot while leaving the other one?

But well, given that Akko and Chariot still get happily together, it seems that the case is the latter, or so I guess. Interesting and a bit painful, what with having her supposed "destined love" finding Love in someone else, against all predictions.

Anyway, hooray for Akko and Chariot. Though it seems they have to be extra careful this time. I wonder if Sucy will still be the first one discovering their secret. But well, even it happens, Akko can count on her as it was shown previously.

Diana would be another one that wouldn't take long to get to the bottom of things as long as they give her reasons, but unlike Sucy, she will definitely won't be as lenient. I found Diana's characterization spot on, in the sense that she's abides by the rules, even if brakes them sometimes, even of she makes exceptions. Now that Akko knows Diana has feelings for her would get things awkward during convos. I wonder if Akko will find a good moment to turn her down while she's still none the wiser. Akko and Chariot will definitely have a good set of obstacles until Akko graduates. Hopefully love will prevail this time.

Good stuff. Had me glued to the screen. 9/10.

This story was pretty much everything, with the relationship between Akko and Ursula in the show itself pretty much shows their closeness should be MORE. I sure hope there’s more stories to come with those two for I ship them just a little more than Diana/Akko.

I liked the story, sorry it was the last chapter, I hope you come back with another project of akko and ursula / chariot, and not be in a single story, I feel that could give more, also debistes detail the hot scene between them two Apart from what you narrated, I hope to see another fic of you, especially of akko and ursula / chariot.

Congratulations.

D

First allow me to say how glad I am that you're back once again, and with possible new projects in mind! I get you. Creative process is quite a thing, isn't it? It definitely all depends on the person and each of them have their own way to deal with it and trying their best to finish a piece it's totally worth of respect on that alone.

That said, this last chapter truly had a bit of everything(I wasn't even expecting that last part omg), albeit somewhat bit rushed considering (in my humble opinion) this one still felt like a climax but since I doubt there's going to be an epilogue(with perhaps a resolution on Diana's side, but I guess the time travel stuff made the point moot), it's still satisfying enough (especially with such an ending).

Consider the objectives accomplished with the story, it had its share of drama, heartwarming, touching and "forbiddeness" this is perhaps the best Chariakko piece in fanfic so far in this fanbase and an interesting Chariot character exploration at it as well. Akko, always the straightforward one, always lighted up things out and Chariot, managing to be Akko's fire, they definitely complemented each other in this. I find it nice and hilarious touch having Akko being "the top" in the moment.

I can't believe it's been a year since the story started! I'm so happy to have been part of the whole ride until the end. I don't remember ever telling you this already, but I love your writing style and this story definitely helped you improve. Thank you so much for this story. I hope to keep seeing more of your other stories as well.

And so the story comes to a close. Truth be told, I was getting a bit worried about the state of this story, but you wrapped it up excellently. When I started reading this almost a year ago exactly, I could tell you were a seasoned writer. But finally reading this ending, I realized that what I'd perceived as a master's skill was merely your jumping off point. It was wonderful seeing your skill improve over the course of a year, a process that sparked me into writing myself a couple of times.

This ending was very well done. Croix coming back with Tome Zero, the banishing of the curse and the night of love were all a wonderful way to tie off your story. I'm happy that Chariot finally obtained her happiness, especially in the way you wrote it.

Keep writing, and doubtless your knack for writing will grow along with it. Do yourself a favor and get something nice to eat, I think you've earned it.

Eagerly awaiting your next project,
-Your Intelligence.

Just a wonderful fic! Dear author i realy hope that you can give us final of this awesome story! Спасибо!

omg, I love it's

My shipp
Chariox \3
That’s hurts, this is amazing but hurt, pleace go on with this delicious agony

Probably the biggest cliff hanger to date in this story. I can think of a lot of Reasons why the professors are there, but most likely "that" one is the reason. Now we have something like two love triangle things, and it's making me wonder if Croix is going Fubar again.