whaaaat?~ you're an Artist too huh? what comic book did you made?
maybe you could make a fan-comics similar like this as well? lol , idk... like doujinshi, perhaps?

yeah... what an annoying cliffhanger!

...Author-san, would you update the next chapter of this fics maybe?, or rather... would someone, somebody...adopt this fics already! when the story just about to get interestingly amusing, it has to stop huh? well, either way...still hoping for the next update, i guess..

this is nice... i want 8man staying indifferent to Miura like this until he knows that she's like, having a crush on him. lol

whoahahaa! Saki joining the club? that's quite interesting... and what's this with Saki and Miura rivalry kinda thing going on? hah! amusing~

.. his father is still a d*#ck eh?, both in the LN and here, lol

i like 8man behavior towards Miura in this, still kinda cynical... hopefully that will continues until Miura like him or something, lol

ohohohooo~ ... another ‘what ifs’ story with interesting scenario indeed~

A ver y interesting premisas, can i use it on my language?

please update

Well, i'm late but i was already reading your Fic before i even made an account here.

Also it's okay, i mean it's great that you have an occupation/career and also adding a thing you like to do with it.

P.S : So... yeah. Long story short, good luck with your career and sorry if what i wrote had a feeling of being a cliché thing to say or something really fucking corny lol.

Good luck, but nobody will pick up your story... because that will be helping you after giving the readers your back. Just settle this story down and move on with your life.

Miura forgetting about Komachi gripes me. The way you jump at the interaction between Hikigaya and the others confuse me. The scene where they were studying, where Yukino radiated a bit of smugness at Hikigaya, only people who’s confident/knows how the other person ticks would do that. Aside from the start of the story, there’s been minimum interaction between the two. Now don’t take it wrong, but focusing on the less-known girls, aka Miura and Kawasaki is good,(Kawasaki best girl of course) but the way their relationship has been hashed out confuses me.

Dude, please follow what you want to do in life. Not gonna lie I was hoping for this story to continue and am a little sad about it, but what you want to do for your career comes first. I totally understand and I’m sure many will agree with me. I wish you the bestest of luck on your journey!

No why it was so good will you ever make a comic of this

good luck!

Sad day... That's disappointing to hear but at least you gave us a heads-up. You should probably put a "Complete", "Up for adoption" or "On Hiatus" on the summary. Good luck, though. This was a very enjoyable read.