Hold it! Is the “season 2 final” a reference to Farewell My Turnabout from JFA?

I love this story. Especially the characterizations and the humor. Please do a sequel or another Fredgeworth story at least. :) Because there are more Phaya stories out there I need more Fredgeworth (I love both ships). And you got Miles and Franzys personality really well worked out, so I would love to read another of your stories. 3

This was a great story, I really enjoyed it. Sometimes it felt like the characters were a little bit out off character but then you got them right again. Franziska was too cuddly for example, but I totally felt her in the scene with ghost Manfred (and some others)... I would totally imagine her being terrified, since I think Manfred was an abusive father to some point (Franzy doesn't have her whip habit from anywhere). It was cute how Miles tried to confort her after she relived the horrible memories of her father, that was probably my favourite scene of this whole story. 3 Maya can be pretty mean sometimes tho. At first I thought she wanted to lock them in the elevator... But your story telling came close to that. xD
Also the development from not willing to share a bed to cuddling went a little fast, but it was still cute. And poor Miles.. brozone is much worse than friendzone. " Good that we all know Franzy just said that because she was angry. Also the scene where Franzy had to complement every one even herself was genious. (Btw the game truth or dare also exists in Germany and is even called similar, so Franzy would know that game.)
I love the humour of this whole fic and it left me giggling and grinning from the funny and the fluffy scenes. I really need a sequel to this or at least another story with those pairings! I mean... Phaya stories are more present than Fredgeworth sadly. So I need the latter more. I love both ships so much. 3

Hahaha! I'm so glad that I happened upon this fic! It's so charming! I really enjoyed this first chapter. Great job, especially on your dialogue — I felt that the tone was perfect for the characters and suited the more lighthearted, wacky moments of the series just wonderfully!

Man, such a great story! My OTPs and all sorts of other stuff makes this a great FanFiction. Keep up the good work!

Cheers,
MuhammadGamingS

I have Phaya peek up in Fredgeworth chapters/stories all the time, so no harm, no foul. Heck, in a certain other FF of mine which is supposed to be pure Nick Slutty McWhoresalot, I STILL had a hint of Fredgeworth poke up its head, as these are my OTP's too! :)
"Denser than Osmium." I legit had to look that up, and now I can't stop laughing at how fitting that is! Mayhap Maya's engagement ring made of this shiny rock? More suiting - and in the case of Nick's ever broke ass (hey at least when Maya admire's the bulge in his pants it WON'T be his WALLET! Hee!) more budget friendly!

It's a cute ploy for Maya to claim she's cold in that skimpy getup (BTW Franny in otaku nightwear is HILARIOUS!) considering she trains under waterfalls! Just call Nick Mr. Freeze since he's allegedly too FRIGID to offer Maya warming comfort on his own accord. Maya you nerd, it's because the sight of you in Fran's sexy sleepwear is making him RIGID and he doesn't wanna let on! You already outed him as a virgin, let him have SOME dignity! XD
Also, schmoopy Fredgeworth is the stuff dreams are made of!

Oh wow...Phaya the double V-card duo? Yikes, I hope that doesn't mean a red belly-button or copious ear infections for Maya down the line (yeesh you'd think ONE of them would know what they're doing!) XD

I'm awful I know, sorry!

Maya what the f*sickle?! Why would she mark down a tick on her paper for THAT question?! Someone get Pearl to channel Mia so she can smack little sis upside the head for being just as dense as Nick - who's not any better. REALLY dude? Not ONE word of appreciation for her new ensemble, you compliment stingy numpty?!

Woohoo! Fredgeworth is official! Very excited about project Plays Matchmaker the next chapter! Unfortunately Phoenix and Maya are such clueless dorks they probably need less of a gentle tap and more of a sledgehammer to get the point across!

I am very touched by the second consecutive chapter dedication. For the record even though Nick and Maya are my number one OTP ( as evidenced in pretty much everything I've written!) Fredgeworth is my number two OTP so this was awesome! Also... FINALLY!
The foolish fools finally stopped playing games and confessed! Whoop! ( no gumshoe required!)

Oh my God you dedicated this chapter to me? And uou gave TE a shout out? *squee! *
You are such a peach!
Also Zvarri indeed! Franziska using a flannel nightgown as a chastity belt is actually funny as hell... Foolish girl don't you know Edgeworth is still hot enough to melt it right off you? ;)

Apparently Franny and Phoenix are more lost than last year's Easter egg when it comes to matters of the heart!
" I feel... Annoyed.“
That being said I was cracking up this entire chapter!
Go matchmaker Maya!

Phoenix you're lucky you're cute because when it comes to having game you're a complete bumble butt! "Do I have to?“ Heeeee such a Nick nerd reaction!

Nick as Maya's everlasting Sir Blue Knight...*swoons* ( I mean sure he usually wields a toilet brush as a sword... but semantics really!)

Rrrnnngh! Steel Samurai Sushi Slash on both Edgeworth and Maya for resorting to childish games instead of just confessing already!
That being said, " Shut Up and Hold Me!" Sounds like it could be a number Gavinners hit single and is SUCH a Franny thing to say! Lol