I love this its brilliant and i love gilan so this was perfect :)

Good!

I love how much half cars about gilan

No, its not terrible. Its the opposite. I hope you keep your sanity.

I liked it! I'll just pretend they were chased by something and had to crawl up to get to safety.

thats pure joy. I love it!

Aww this is adorable and so well written! Awesome job :)

This one was perfect! The situation was set up very well, and the describing words you used got a vibrant imagine in my mind of hat was happening. Loved it!

This is great! I love your writing style and how you explore what could have possibly happened in Gilan's apprenticeship. -

Aww, that was awesome! I wonder what they were doing on the ledge in the first place, though? But I loved how Gilan just knew- he just KNEW that Halt was going to try something so stubbornly futile and stupid ;P Well written suspense- great job!

this was great :). i loved how gilan knew what halt would try.

OH MY GOSH
I LOVE IT
IVE SEENTHIS VIDEO AND I LOVE HOW YOU SORTA QUOTED IT SOME PLACES AND WORKED IN THE WORDING SO WELL

This makes me so warm inside! Thank you so much for sharing and posting, you've made my day!

I'm glad you're still alive; I hope college treats you alright!

(P.S. You don't need to answer this if you're uncomfortable, but do you happen to be of the faith that produced that video?)

Loved it! It was very cute to read how in a tricky situation, Gilan needs Halt, but what you don't expect is that Halt needs Gilan just as much! :D 3

It was great! I totally loved it-loved the suspense, the desperate situation, and the characters' interactions and relationships. It was awesome as usual. Halt and Gilan were wriiten brilliantly. Actually everything was written brilliantly. XD

I totally get college assignments ruling your life. Same thing is happening to me. Its no fun to do all those projects and writing assignment for school and not do any for yourself. It nearly drives me crazy too. DX

Thanks so much for the awesome short!