Reviews for City of Angels
SPCLjmm chapter 1 . 7/31
Delightful
saashi samy chapter 1 . 5/15
I find it a pretty fun option, since Chlo is younger and inexperienced seems more interested in meeting the person rather than the legend.

I think it would be fun to see what kind of adventures Lucifer could provoke having an accomplice in the police and it would be great to see how he reacts to a smaller Trixie, surely that way it will be easier for Trixie to accept the strange behaviors as normal
Natters chapter 1 . 2/8
Great fic
NatalyaShae chapter 1 . 7/16/2019
lmao, lovely!
A Strawberry chapter 1 . 6/18/2019
This. This was epic!
Lol, loved how you turned that ‘what if’ in Rico’s into a whole fleshed out thing, while both remained in character.
True, Lucifer was a bit more forthcoming than I expected, but she’s still newly interesting to him, and since Chloe knows, it’s believable. SO glad that she stopped him from wreaking his wings.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
Oh! I really enjoy this story! So many posibilites!
Mysticalmagicks chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
This was a rather nice read. I liked the alternative way that you had this timeline go, and how you had Lucifer show Chloe his wings to get her to believe him that he is, in fact, the devil. And then to have Chloe actually persuade him to keep them-I can actually see her kind of doing that-but still...brilliant! Also if you do by chance, happen to write more, will be interesting to see how different and unique Chloe's and Lucifer's friendship will turn out.

Overall, this was a really good one-shot that stuck to canon (somewhat) and didn't stray from the character's personalities.
Pakmai chapter 1 . 2/11/2019
I just saw this episode (I'm late to this fandom), and I nearly screamed at the screen for Lucifer to TURN AROUND. That was SO frustrating. I love this version of events. And if you ever do write more, I'd love to see how you handle why Chloe splits with Dan, if Lucifer and Chloe become better friends or getting to work together earlier.. how Trixie feels growing up with Uncle Lucifer. Since she would be around 2 at the time of this story..

I hope you write more, but thank you for this it was great!
Patougv chapter 1 . 1/11/2019
Wow, that was a pretty long OS, a very good one! I love it, thank you for sharing!
Joker Army chapter 2 . 1/1/2019
Damn this is a really great story it’s too bad you don’t keep going with it to lead somewhere
Didric chapter 1 . 9/30/2018
I'm a big fan of Lucifer, and this is, possibly the only fanfic I've where you/the writer maneged to have Lucifer and Chloe, act like Lucifer and Chloe, so really good job with that, thank you
P.S. I support making this a twoshot/full story
EreshkigalGirl chapter 1 . 9/16/2018
This eas wonderful! I love it, and everyone was so in character. Hopefully the muse will strike again, and we can see if Lucifer was there for Chloe in the wake of Palmetto Street.
554Laura chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
I enjoyed this story very much. I could hear the characters speaking as I read it.
Aeon The Dimensional Girl chapter 1 . 5/28/2018
This has to be one of my favorite one-shots in the fandom and let me tell you why:

You just created an alternative universe with endless possibilites, in which the events that happen in 5 years can still happen with different circumstances and that 5 year old gap in this AU is so full of potential hidden scenes in which Lucifer is part of Chloe's and Dan's life, Lucifer and Linda, Maze on earth...

Man, you just wrote this extreamly well. I can see so many possibilities with this and I honestly would love to see you write more of this AU.

Seriously, great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2018
In the Casper fandom, I’ve read two stories called “Ghostly Encounter” and “Memories” did you write them? Were they deleted? I’ve been looking for these two stories for a while now. PLEASE respond :)
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