Wonderful, I appreciate how max reacted.

This was absolutely amazing. You are such a talented writer. This is just what I have been looking for for ages! Thank you so much.️

Great story! I love how you've used proper grammar and punctuation. I also like how you've used the fact that Dustin says 'Shit' a lot and how Max swears every time she gets a chance. Personally, Max is my favourite character and always has been since Season 2. I love Dustin too, I mean he's awesome.

One part that I don't like is how you didn't be specific on who was talking or who was unconscious and how you didn't add the part where Billy dies. Other than that, you did great! Keep posting!

-clawkzyt

Nice one :)

LMAO at your authors notes i hope you did well the story was adorable

This was so sweet. I loved how the kids just panicked over Steve. They did so good taking care of him until the adults got there.

Oh shit
Never think of it that way.
what a crazy perspective
but I liked it
thanks for the Fic

I love bromance stories between Steve, Dustin and Max, this one has just become my favorite ! It's because of the feelings, your writing (I thought I was seeing them while I was reading)... If you want to add more chapters (I'd love to read a chapter in Steve point of view), you'll already have one fan ! Thanks for sharing !

Another excellent fic, wikelia. I love your Max. The intensity of the rescue is well played as is the decided brother aspect. I like the image of Steve flanked by Max and Dustin, all sleeping. Well done.

I do wish you weren’t deceased—unless your ghost can read reviews and emails..

This was awesome. I love the selfless act Steve exhibited, and you’ve captured the characters quite well. Thanks for sharing, and good luck on your midterm!

This was wonderful! I love Steve being the older brother figure to both Dustin and Max. Great characterization of all the characters, and I absolutely loved how Dustin and Max waited all night until Steve woke up. Great job! Thank you so much for sharing this!

This was good. Great characterisation of Max and Dustin. I loved how Max acted the entire time Steve was injured.