Reviews for Blue Eyes
Gaia Kings chapter 4 . 1/6
Bitch be making me cry this early in the day...
Vi-Violence chapter 4 . 6/25/2019
Nice work.
Tuulikki chapter 4 . 9/2/2018
Excellent idea for an AU fic! I'm really curious to see where this'll go. I can believe this last chapter was hard to write, but you did great job about it in the end.
MBB chapter 4 . 6/25/2018
Interesting and promising alternatre universe. And wellwritten too
Mr. Spinner chapter 4 . 6/13/2018
Oh, the feels! Poor Thomas, poor Malcolm, poor little Harry. Your writing is heart-wrenching in its quality. Cannot wait til you next update!
Musafreen chapter 4 . 6/13/2018
I can see why this chapter was hard to write. I was in tears by the time I reached the end. THE POOR BOYS. The toughest, most dangerous person in their little group just vanished. I can see it in Malcolm's panic which he's trying to shove aside for the sake of the boys, and Thomas angry and HURT and latching on to Harry.

Ah. FEELS.

I am very glad you are continuing this story! i can't wait for more.
Parzival vi Britannia chapter 4 . 6/12/2018
w00t another great chapter! you should post this fic on spacebattles creative writing forum, you'll get more views there! and/or darklordpotter
Musafreen chapter 3 . 6/10/2018
Uh-oh. Ferrin sounds like a Raith cousin, probably put to this by Lara. Whatever her agenda is, it can't be good... or at the very least it's going to be double edged. /He/ definitely exhibits the mildly deranged characteristics you'd associate with a less controlled WCV, anyway.

I AM GRINNING SO HARD YOU HAVE NO IDEA this is everything I want from a DF Fic. Moar please.
Musafreen chapter 2 . 6/10/2018
That is so incredibly adorable. I love the details- how Thomas specifically sets up a situation to test Malcolm, his bargaining and the threats to stab eyes out with forks. I'd say it was the Raith side showing, but honestly the LeFay side of the family is likely to do all that more.

I really like this story, and I really hope you are going to keep writing it.
Musafreen chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
YES. THANK YOU. THIS IS THE EXACT AU I WANTED.

Can I just say I am excited about this whole dynamic you have set up, and I shake my head at Maggie and Malcolm because this will not end well but oh my god I am so excited for it anyway.

Thank you~
TrueSamael chapter 2 . 2/12/2018
Man does this have a lot of promise, I can also totally see Thomas following through with that fork.

Looking forward to seeing how this evolves.
AndurilofTolkien chapter 2 . 2/10/2018
like this ch :)
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 1/23/2018
aw like
Monkey Typewriter chapter 1 . 1/20/2018
Very good so far. Nice to see a new, serious Dresden story seeming to start up!