Reviews for Lost Ground |
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Queenofbeingcringey chapter 1 . 11/8/2018 I think it's very sweet. Definitely a favorite for this girl! |
Hidari chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 One more chapter? They're so cute! |
SpicyChestnut chapter 1 . 4/22/2018 Another great Zelda piece! Loved it. Again: pacing and characterizations were excellent, and just the right balance of fluff and angst/hurt/comfort and humor. Awesome job! |
Tayashia chapter 1 . 1/27/2018 awe! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2018 CUTE! MOAR PLZ |
gammathetaalpha chapter 1 . 1/19/2018 Looking great! Your writing continues to improve! I hope everything is going well! |
Professor of Gallifrey chapter 1 . 1/18/2018 Awe, cute |
Minstrel of Madness chapter 1 . 1/17/2018 This was fun. I was surprised it didn't turn into Zelink but honestly it was kinda refreshing to see a piece focusing on their relationship that didn't involve mushy-gushy nonsense or a ton of unnecessary smut. You did good, and you've earned yourself a favorite. I'd be kinda interested to see where you might take their relationship from here (you'd probably do a better job than certain unnamed game companies that promised a story-based DLC in December.) |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2018 Excellent. This is the second time you've written about what happens after the end of a Zelda game. Once again, this is a thoughtful take on the sort of thing most people don't think about. I'd always just sort of assumed that he simply retired to the house he bought in Hateno Village, but I guess Zelda has a lot of work to do in terms of rebuilding her kingdom, and Link would probably want to be involved in that. |
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/16/2018 Well written |
Just-AWESOME-old-me chapter 1 . 1/16/2018 This is so CUTE! Seriously, adorable! I had this dumb smile plastered across my face the entire time, haha! I'm excited for more! :D |
miserymire chapter 1 . 1/15/2018 This is so cute and really well written! I only spot one teensy problem with it. You said he gave her the Silent Princess on the morning of her seventeenth birthday and then they kept their distance for several weeks afterward, but the day of her seventeenth birthday was the day they went up Mount Lanayru and Ganon broke free. I guess after that they technically did keep their distance for a few weeks (plus a few thousand extra weeks), but I don't think that was what you were going for, haha. But even with that little blip, this story is great. I love their dialogue and interaction, and Zelda's thoughts on their situation. I think you captured her character perfectly. |