it's so sad to know this only has a couple more chapters left. I love this story even if it isn't really a Sonic fanfiction
I still love it though and I really hope that you will make more stories for this lovely group even when you are done with the story you want to tell
Also I don't know if this is my major in psychopathology coming up but I am getting some serious bulimia vibes from Maria

First of all, happy birthday! I hope u have a great day and an amazing year coming up! Also this was another fantastic chapter i could actually feel the pit in my stomach during the jealous bits. You just have a way of putting me into the characters shoes instead of feeling like im watching this happen from the outside. And i absolutely love how you characterize amy and sally. You have the perfect ratio of jealousy and humanity and layers of personality for her which is so rare to find for her. I cant wait to see what happens next i really hope maria is ok :(. I already mentioned how i love how you flesh out the supporting cast and giving them issues and stories within this one makes for such an interesting and enveloping read. And coincidentally fireworks came up on my playlist as i was reading this so that was a really cool thing that happened lol

Accountless lurker here again - thank you for developing such well rounded characters. It makes reading so much more intense and enjoyable even when the subject matter is heavy. I can't wait to read what comes next, I'll be on the edge of my seat about Maria, she's one of my favourites! Also one shots and side stories would be great if you enjoy writing them!

OMG IS MARIA GONNA DIE? LIKE IN THE GAME? OMG GURL I LOVE YOUR UPDATES AHHH! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER AND HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY! You’re a year younger than me XD I really love this side story of Sally, Elias and Megan 3 You’re doing amazing! Remember to eat well, get enough sleep and stay safe!

Nice conclussion on this part of the story

AHHHH ANOTHER BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN CHAPTER! I’m so excited to read the ending of this version of your fanfic as the last ending was amazing as well!

Great again. I love it! My name is Cobalt The Fox, signing off

Great fanfic. I love transformers rescue bots! It is kind of embarrassing but I think I can share it with the sonic fans. My name is Cobalt The Fox, signing off

I just want to say that this is one of the most brilliantly written and interesting fanfics ive ever read! I found this on ao3 n im just obsessed! You have such a great way of accurately writing the characters and their actions and still fleshing out the side characters and reading this paints such a vivid image in my head which is so hard to find in writing. Ive been scouring ff for something that could compare and i still have yet to find something similar. I love this wholeheartedly and i cant wait to see what you have next in store! Id also love to read any other works you create after this one. Thank you for such an amazing read :3

ooh, i can sense some amy sally friendship potential since both of them are (like )sisters to elias. besides that, whatevers happening in america is rn crazy, so stay safe C: thank u for the chapter i love your writing!

no but this is really annoying me cuz every time i write my reviews, the app doesn’t send it and it deletes. anyways, i’m so glad elias and amy have talked things out, and i’m also proud of amy for making effort to communicate. you can really see her growth from the start of this story and i love it. i just hope sonic doesn’t move away from amy because he thinks that her and elias are together, their little moment at the start was cute lol. i can’t wait to see sally and amy truly talk it out!

This Is The last time I'm Reading a Sonic fanfiction. I'm Leaving This stupid Fandom and hpe to NEVER return

I know this is a slowburn and I do like my slowburns don't get me wrong but damn are they taking their sweet time in realizing they really love eachother. But then again they are teenagers, they have to get through a lot of stuff first I get that. I just hope to see it soon enough though, I need some happiness in these horrible times.

Gonna go on a little tangent here and I hope you don't take this the wrong way, because I do love your writing and this story and the way you write these characters in a more realistic, modern way. Instead of like, all the old-age tropes of Sonic fanfiction from years past. But still, I really hope you don't make Amy and Sally too antogonistic towards eachother. Like I get a story has to have tension and angst and Amy has to end with Sonic in the end but, that's no reason to get back into the whole "girls fight over a boy" thing you know? And like, Amy right now, the official one I mean, is like really in her best place in years. She has more representation in the franchise, she's a protagonist and a leader in the new comics, she's more mature and respected amongst the characters themselves and the fandom in general. She's just in a much better place right now that she was the decade prior. But Sally, Sally is basically gone. Thanks to all that Penders and Archie drama she may very well be gone for good in all official material. And I cannot help but think bad of how badly she was always treated by the fandom. She was always "that girl getting in the way" not just to like Sonamy fans but Sonic fans in general that didn't like her "giving orders" to the main male protagonist. And like i'm an Amy fan and I love Sonamy too but, I just feel that we should have done better for Sally. And now that all these characters are gone, the least we can do is do good for them now y'know? And getting rid of those tropes from before and giving them more depth to how we write and portray them and think about them is a way in which we could do that. Sally doesn't have to be just an obstacle for Amy to get over. She can be a friend, and they can talk and understand eachother. I think that would be nice.

Anyway, sorry for that. I mean you're one of the few writers in here who really tries to like, incorporate a progressive and feminist outlook on the way fanfiction is written so like it's not like you don't know this already or like you have done anything to replicate these tropes so far but you know, I just felt like saying so.

Oh and another thing is you know, in the rebooted Archie comics, the writers were actually pushing hard for Sally/Nicole to be a thing. Archie didn't really let them be too blatant about it, but they did try and you could very well interpret their relationship in that continuity as romantic. So y'know, it's not like Sally has to end up alone or with some random guy in the end. I mean it's up to you but that's just a suggestion on my part.

Again, sorry for the long review/rant thingy it's just that I've been following this story for a long time and I wanted to leave review like 10 chapters ago but I keep putting it off so now instead of something small I just wrote this whole messy word vomit thingy. Sorry if it annoys you, but do know that seeing this story update always brings me joy and I look forward to every single update.

This is going so brilliantly. I'm seriously loving the pacing and the way you write is so compelling, I find myself checking for updates almost daily!
This chapter was so wonderful to read, I love the development of male/female friendships you have.

YESSS things seem to be shaping well for amy and sally (i think?). i’m happy elias and amy talked it out, i’m just worried if sonic will think that amy is dating elias. their conversation at the start was so cute.