Oh. I want more.

Woah!
Good woah, but woah

love it and seriously wish it was longer

Huh - what happened next? Did Harry ever get a human healer? A mind healer? Did he ever find who he really was, and not the persona of the Freak that his relatives gave him? Or was Voldie just using this as another torture of Harry's spirit?

Loved how Harry gave the Dark Lord his address.

Yes! Finally someone sees in the 5th book was mad me so made. Your Harry is what I expected.

I know this isn't the time for it, but I just HAVE to say it:

Harry goin through his goth phase~

please write more...sooooo good, I like the basically whole "I'm done with you attitude" he has towards Dumbles & everything/one else...every time I read the actual books/watch the films or read some of the fanfics, I always want there to be someone in there to say to everyone that claims to care about Harry &/or claims to protect/be there for him, "well, sure, now. but what about when he really needs it? you lot make yourselves pretty damn scarce. you only care about him, you're only there for him when it's convenient for you, when it suits you. otherwise you can't be bothered. & whenever one of you messes up, whenever your mistakes cause something bad to happen, he's always the one who pays for it. At least Voldemort just kills you, but you lot...you play with him, lure him in, tell him that you'll take care of him, you'll protect him, you'll love him...& right after you dry his tears, you reach in & you squeeze, your nails bite, & it withers & blackens until it's last thump...you're poison..."
well, at least the first 5 sentences, the rest I kinda just thought up just now (I was on a roll). but it's true, they are kinda poisonous (not Neville or Luna, but they're not apart of this/the Order), especially Dumbles...& it's true, every time the Order/or any adult that's supposed to protect him messes up, does something bad, Harry's always the one who pays for it.
anyway, please, please write more.

it is quite hard to see that Harry is treated better by Voldemort than Dumbledore... and that Voldemort (the evil one) doesn't require Harry to kill wheras Dumbledore (the good one) does require it. Really ironic, isn't it?

JM

This Harry needs a lot of help. Severus has the right thought. Harry needs a healer.

Very imaginative. Enjoyed it a lot. Seemed actually like someone could act and feel living like poor Harry was forced to live.

This was an awesome story, and while I feel and know others feel it is incomplete, some stories are great being incomplete due to the reader thinking about alternative endings for themselves.

:))

Awesome story!

It is good but you left it unfinished. Sorry but it makes no sense. You have your readers wanting more but then you just cut it off when it is starting to get really good. Really I know you are a better writer than that. And even though I said it is good. It is also your worst. I am sorry if this makes you upset or mad at me. But it is the truth. And I will always tell the truth when it comes to reviewing anyone stories. That is just the why I am

I like the story. Poor kid!