This is extremely well written, though the characters emotional state seems off. At age 27, the remaining members of the DA go clubbing, they’re all allegedly still friends despite different romantic relationships, Harry and Hermione dated and broke up, and they’re doing it again.

What changed? Why is this time different? Why is it they could be considerate towards one another and stick it out for months with a horcrux around their necks but can’t do the same without?

This fic was lovely!

I hope Hermione remembered she could take the morning after pill. Good story!

Td

Kind of confused by this chapter, or at least for this chapter. You'd mentioned that Harry and Hermione had dated twice before, but with this one, with the flashback you said only once... which is it?

I found this story fantastic. I really enjoyed the way it was written and I quite liked all the couple's (including RonxLuna). Thank you for the story and I look forward to reading parts 23

and im done within a few paragraphs. you're one of those twats that ships ron with someone else out of his league.
this story is dog shit anyhow. that just added to it. why does anyone do that? the ship dont work and everyone Hermione and Harry are uncharacteristically immature. bad form

Way too much exposition in this chapter. Nearly gave up as it just kept going on and was kinda depressing.

Just started reading this only to discover you're another of those delusional people who pair poor Luna with that pile of dog shit and try and convince us they're happy. Who fo you think you're bullshitting?
Make a note not to read your shit anymore

Hi! It's been a while since I've read Harmony fanfics and I love that I stumbled upon this. It's good and gives a real life perspective on how relationships operate at times.

Why do you refer to Hermione as 'the Granger woman' though? It's kinda weird or bad since it seemed impersonal or something. You do refer her as the brunette or Granger so why not stick to those? You do not call Harry as the 'black haired wizard' or'the Potter man" or Ginny or as the 'Weasley woman' or the 'red haired witch.' I think you could stick with calling her Hermione since she's with her friends and Granger seems impersonal in that environment. At times brunette if you think her name and pronouns are mentioned more than enough.

You have a knack for writing but ya really need to utilise the option for the B pairing. That way others like myself are not caught off our guard like meself and a few others seemed ta be by that awful, awful pairin that is Luna and that Prat, Ron

Be cautious about possible issues such as content and legalities.

Such an awesome story! Thanks for this one and please keep writing MORE! We can never have enough H/Hr.
As for Gellert99, you are right, you are impolite and rude. Nobody "tricked" you. It was clear from the firsr chapter that this was NOT a R/Hr story at all. Get over yourself and respect other people opinion and work.
We are very proud to stand up for a couple who share a bond so strong and beautiful. Even JKR has admitted that they would have made so much more sense that R/Hr: A relationship based on meaningless fighting, bullying and so on.
Go get your book and content yourself with the fact that they (sadly) end up together there although we all know it made no sense at all.

An honest and mature situation that most of us have experienced or at least wanted a second chance in order to experience. You wrote a fine story, don't let the haters tell you otherwise.

I would love it more if Hermione resisted him a bit more. I don't really like this Harry