I love the story so far, also I have a question why doesnt Howard just make more bullets the base materials wouldnt be hard to find, and Im pretty sure star wars has some kind of 3d printing that can then use those said materials.

let's be honest, another war is the last thing earth needs. 200 years isn't enough time to recover.

This has promise, minus a few grammar errors... It's good, i'm keeping an Eye on this one... Heh, It was 66 before I posted this review...

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It’s back!

I saw this and decided that your writing style was a bit incoherent so here's a tip.

Start all speech that isn't a direct continuation of something a character has previously said with a capital.

Example:
"Hold up." X commanded, "Where have you been?" ~Use capitals~

"Uh," Y stumbled, "the bunker?" ~Don't used capitals~

And also, for every new character introduced, start a new line, the paragraph that follows should be context, description or scenery that directly correlates to what has been said.

Example:
"Yo, what the hell is that? On the ceiling?" Z gaped. Everyone else turned their head from him to the roof of the room. Lo and behold. For amongst thousands of party string and confetti decorations... hung Y in his full naked glory. Feeling the gazes of over a dozen men, he turned his head to look at them and said.

"Probably a mutated spider or something." Shrugged Y, pouring some Bourbon in a cup. And from that day onward, the crew had decided to erase the events of the 'Floating Trauma' from memory. And if you asked them about it, they would probably shoot you.

This format makes writing a lot more digestible and easy to read. But you don't have to take my advice if you don't want to.

...y-oo-u heuehxbdshhwhsbx IT LIVE OOOOOO THANKS THE LORD nice chapter XD next power amor for the lol XP

This is poorly written. I never understand why people like you, who are not good writers, don't use spellcheckers. Grammarly even helps with basic sentence structure.

Fat man with the Tiny Tots mini nukes? Or the MIRV from Fallout 3 firing the Tiny Tots? :D

He should have the desert ranger armor

Uuuuh, slugthrowers are not looked down upon in SW. Its just that they cost a lot more in general than a blaster, a lot harder to use and maintain, and only outperform blasters in very specific situations (fighting a jedi, for example). A normal clone armor is not designed to protect against slugthrowers, its basically an armor made of really fancy guturistic plastic designed to protect from blaster fire. Even a tusken raiders rifle can pierce through that kind of armor. A clone is supposed to know what his armor is weak against, so why the hell would he boast and mock Courier's gun?

I kind want to see Howard in Power Armor.

i think howard will use the desert ranger armor for his warzone conflict or during umbra arc he will using his power armor in frontline

Have you never heard of a structure called A SENTENCE!?

Option b subject 3 yes Mandalorian armor