Reviews for Haruhi Fujioka and the Goblet of Fire
Mamabug chapter 22 . 4/16
I am so glad you finished this off, I have been wondering about you and hoping you would eventually come back to writing as I've really missed your stories. Hope everything is going okay with you and you've been gone for good reasons.

There is so much to love in this chapter - 3-way quidditch (with dragons!), Kyoya trying to headhunt Hermione, baby dragon naming antics, 'she gave me a name and a hoard!', Mori's distaste for ninjas over samurais... I think the line that got me the most, though, was Kyoya's 'Certifiably?' That was just a perfect note for the character. As much as he snarks on them, he loves the chaos.

Writing a good fanfiction that has original plotting and keeps the characters consistent is tough, writing a cross-fic which does that for both universes is nigh on impossible. And then to add in unique original characters (the dragons) and several lol moments throughout each chapter - I bow before you. Simply awesome and I hope this gets the attention it deserves. You have a serious gift for this stuff. The dragon story lines were unique and interesting enough to prove you could write an enjoyable original work if you ever wanted to. I would read the heck out of it.

Stay healthy, and I sincerely hope this marks your return to writing. MB
thomaspheasant chapter 22 . 4/14
please update immediately
Chalice13 chapter 22 . 4/12
O M G! Thank you, thank you, thank you! This was such an amazing story and I am so grateful you finished it. Sad too, because I enjoyed it so much I didn't want it to end. I loved how you managed to keep the integrity of both universes true while merging them. And a love story between Hermione and Kyoya? Perfect! Maybe you could do a story where Hermione does go to Japan for special summer classes at Ouran. Maybe Ouran could offer a special summer cram school, and they could offer a scholarship that wouldn't interfere with Haruhi's. Or maybe a summer internship or exchange program. (I really Don't want to let go!)
I thought I'd fall off my chair laughing at the interactions with the dragons. Those were brilliant, and really played up Mori's dry sense of humor. After all, he could have stepped in before Harry got so twisted up each time.
But really, thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to seeing more of your stories in the future.
kitten198485 chapter 22 . 4/12
are you going to make a sequel? :P for year 5?
cefiro marino chapter 22 . 4/12
VᴥV()(ᴥʋ) increíble
AlchemyWriter chapter 22 . 4/12
This was a great story!
GoddessxNyte2 chapter 22 . 4/12
i hope you write more. we didn't get to see who haruhi ended up with :( i love ur works they always make me smile and laugh.
MikaToshino chapter 21 . 11/1/2019
I really love this story I can't wait to see were this goes. Its a beautiful story I do wonder who will win haruhi and the dragons have made me totally root for mori though the mermaids where also adorable bit the dragon hatchlings won my heart especially trouble
GoddessxNyte2 chapter 21 . 10/21/2019
i love this story. i'd love more but i also want more of at what price love. so if u can please update that one too. but definately this one first. i just i couldn't put this story down read it all in 6 hours. just awesome! i laughed so hard sooo many times i got a headache and had to use the restroom soo many times. just please update ur stories ur freakign brilliant!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/2/2019
he would be beneath her so it would never work out
Guest chapter 15 . 8/20/2019
You spelt Charlie's name wrong and why did you make it seem that the Ouran kids are so popular because Fleur Delacour is an actual Veela so that make her more good looking than the Ouran kids and also making mermaid is nice is a bit stupid and also saying that the reason why Ranka would be safe because the mermaid for some reason like Haruhi when it is clearly stated in the books which are cannon that the ones taken are safe and also I really don't like you treat the Harry Potter side of the story because clearly how would someone be able to put in Haruhi when Dumbledore is the one that made the line , so what your implying is that the twins or maybe Kyoya are more smarter than Albus Dumbledore and I really hope you don't make Haruhi fight Voldemort and she's the one that bring back both Harry and Cedric cause in reality she would also be a spare and Voldemort would just kill her because again she's not important and she wouldn't be able to stand a chance and it that happens I will be really mind boggled
Guest chapter 21 . 6/3/2019
Love this chapter! 'Trouble' is definitely a good name! Makes me wonder what Harry and Mori's names would be in dragon! Can't wait to see more, and I'm glad everyone seems alright!
jescweber chapter 21 . 5/30/2019
Two of my favorite stories blended together! Double-bliss! Thank you for your time and talent. Building new worlds, and letting us visit!
SakuraKoi chapter 21 . 5/10/2019
So good and funny
Guest chapter 21 . 5/6/2019
This was great! Glad everyone seems alright, though it is interesting to learn that Voldemort has had no influence in Asia. I don't know if you plan to carry this crossover to the other books, but it would be great to see the host club's influence on the story! Great chapter!
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