I haven't read the other reviews for this story, but I do not believe it's all bad, or remotely bad at all. I think that mainly its just a little disjointed- events don't flow naturally, there are skips here and there in the narrative that would have been much smoother with a transitory sentence or paragraph... one moment we're with the MC strapped to a chair and the next moment we're in a fever dream and the very next sentence we're ripping Obito's arm off and the next moment we're exploding. That was one of the main ones that stuck out to me was the Obito sequence.

I think that a stuttering narrative is the largest take-away. I really like the story, the characters, and how the MC has his insomnia problem... it makes him feel more human, and the fact that he overachieves whilst in a psudo-haze of lack of sleep makes him stand out.

I wouldn't mind re-reading this story after a little homework was done on smoothing everything out- read Dreaming of Sunshine and the Catch Your Breath series if you haven't already. ;)

Overall, not bad, but not spectacular. I can't really say much as I'm pretty much the same in my own writing, but I think that is why this one sticks out to me so much! I believe you can do and be better, so keep on keep'n on! :)

Please update.

Are you going to update this story ? Please it's one of the best I readed ! It's not like character is : I'm super powerful and nothing can stop me. We can see the character grow. I don't know if you know this, but someone posted it on Wattpad. That person said that's not their story and gave link to this. Please come back and pick up the story again.

P.S. Sorry for my English, I'm form different country.

This story reads like darkness, there's a slowness and muted acceptance that things are not going well and may never go well, so I guess it needs a specific mood to read.

The early story progression gives me Team Tensai vibes - Tata is so young and small and yet... Since it is Naruto, it's something that can be believed. Have particularly enjoyed your medical ninja-related theories.

Hope you'll update someday in the future. I'm looking forward to seeing how ROOT training changes the girl who disappeared, how Han and Konan ended up in Konoha and how the nanobeetles here work out. Those give me ROOT rinkaichu vibes.

That was a confusing ending. I'm guessing genjitsu? Similar mangekyo to Itachi?

Holy shit. A two year old roaming about by himself. Reading books. About the Sage of Six Paths. With accurate information that shouldn't exist. Fucking around with chakra like no one's ever done before.

If it's gonna be an AU, and this contrived, might as well make nothing bad ever happen without even trying. Directed by George Lucas.

this is fcking annoying. people manipulating MC. he should just retaliate and kill his patients to send a message.

um wtf kind of sharingan does ur character have?

I no this title it's from a poem I still don't no how it means thinking about suicide.

I still haven't realized wtf is going on, shouldn't you atleast try to make it clear where our character is and who he is and the people around him, all I got is, he's Uchiha, his brother his Itachi but somehow you fucked first chapter making it sound like he is Itachi yet you simply do not explain enough details around mc to get a clear picture of wtf you want us to read
Dropped

I will be so hurt if this story is never finished. So so hurt, it's such a good story.

You possibly can absorb water, your body is mostly made out of it and it can be absorbed through your skin pores.

I can’t wait to see further development in the relationship between the oc and Orchimaru and Danzo. Please update!

I agree with Fugaku all humans are selfish, it in human nature to be selfish and Takenaka need to knowledge that if he don’t he will never grow as person, once he knowledge that he will become stronger as a person

I kinda want Takenaka become missing nin because he killed danzo, It would make the plot a lot more interesting and itachi and Uchiha Clan would try finding out why Takenaka left the the village and why he killed danzo or Uchiha Clan could leave the village because they not being treated fairly instead of planning coup de'tat