| Reviews for The Chessmaster: White Knight |
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   ABBReads chapter 17 . 7/19 I have to think that Hermione’s related to the tsar via her grandmother. Something is up there! |
| ABBReads chapter 7 . 7/18 Ron having his own area to excel in is huge! |
| Theia Darkmoon chapter 16 . 5/8 Hermione's grandmother is the runaway from Russia, isn't she? It all fits - she escaped from the arranged marriage and knew about Harry Potter. Maybe she gets delivered wizarding newspapers? |
| jinxwalnut25 chapter 3 . 5/2 I LOVE this series so far! I heard about it from reddit with glowing reviews, and this is one of the most enthralling and we’ll written fics i’ve read. The dialogue is good, not too dry or too long, and the characters are the best in character while still suiting you’re agenda. Well done dude |
| Birds Love Words chapter 3 . 4/19 Based on the previous book, I didn't realize Ginny was alive! She was never mentioned, so I thought it was an AU difference. |
| Kamile chapter 19 . 3/12 I am loving these politics! It's so well done and I can't wait for when the trio becomes part of it all. |
| BookObsessed3000 chapter 21 . 12/4/2019 3,2,1 lmaoooo |
| BookObsessed3000 chapter 8 . 12/4/2019 Oh no this is bad... If Voldemort claimed his seat damn it’s gonna be much more harder... |
| BookObsessed3000 chapter 3 . 12/4/2019 UMBRIDGE?! WHA- |
| BookObsessed3000 chapter 1 . 12/4/2019 Must’ve fled from Grindlewald, this reaction is really unnatural, especially when her reaction is that... |
| Kristy chapter 18 . 9/16/2019 Just thought I’d mention Wagga Wagga isn’t a small Armenian village, it’s actually a fairly sizeable Australian city. I know this, because I grew up there. Also, the name comes from the local Aboriginal tribe, and means place of many crows |
| nkh1 chapter 24 . 8/1/2019 excellent follow up |
| Tinchek chapter 10 . 7/31/2019 I'm loving your series! Only bit of criticism is a lack of descriptions of who is talking, when and how are they talking. Are they excited and loud, are they whispering conspiratorialy, or are they nervous? I don't know, I can only guess. The biggest problem with this is that I don't who is speaking when there is three or more characters involved in a dialogue. |
| HwaseungOz chapter 7 . 7/28/2019 In this chapter, I have found a tremendous plot hole that will surely invalidate the rest of this series—Ron’s first move should be c5 not c4 |
| mrsProbie chapter 13 . 4/22/2019 Obviously aware that you got feedback and wrote more scenes, but I just wanted to say that I LOVE how you wrote the Quidditch match. Not too much focus on gameplay or on Harry's internal monologue. Looking forward to the rest! |
