Reviews for The Keyhole
Guest chapter 25 . 7/2
PLEASE CONTINUE
V1DEOGAMER chapter 25 . 12/13/2019
Hey just finished reading both The Door and this story and I've got to say love both of them and can't wait for the next story in the series
Wyatt chapter 25 . 11/16/2019
I am in love with your story I wait for your next chapter every day expecting one there even though I know there won’t be one because it takes time to do this and have you ever considered to be like asking somebody on YouTube to do an animation of this or like a comic
Human sentinel chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
Permission to make an AU story of this series?
Fox boy chapter 3 . 10/13/2019
I think that I should have Eli turn into a fox
Falcon93 chapter 25 . 9/10/2019
Will there be a sequel?
Mr Black and White chapter 25 . 8/18/2019
Very good. I wait with baited breath for the next one!
There are not names chapter 25 . 8/18/2019
I loved it I don't know haw I did not see the email telling me it was out till naw. And you said that it's not the end so will you make a new story with the Sam mcs in the Same world like you did?
ItsBurgerTime chapter 25 . 8/15/2019
This was awesome! Looking forward to the next part of this series!
Makahala XIII chapter 25 . 8/15/2019
I swear that Judy is oblivious with her driving not seeing her mate and kit expressions. Looks the troop was worried for Eli and of course the rivalry among Lyla and Kimi. Hey Finnick appeared and uncle to Darryl, curious.

Fangmeyer out with Rosalie and bumping into old friend and unfolding a one-up contest.

Big day for the ZPD, unfortunately for Jack and his date may have topped in awkwardness and tries really hard to salvage the situation. Walter giving the speech and seeing Jack crying alongside getting his badge and saluted by both the first rabbit and fox officers.

So far alright for Baily and Sophie at the family get-together and surprise Baily sees Lionheart irony right? Looks like Sharla made her decision by discussing with Gideon. Looks like Mister Otterton and his family getting ready for Sarah's birthday. Looks like Renato and Lily had successful dinner with Mister Big's family and would love to see the family reunion with Renato taking Lily. Though I wish might see a little bit about Mister Big's. newest human bodyguard.

Haven't seen Adam show up since he was recovering alongside with a prosthetic leg and seeing the scene in front of him. A small awkward budding romance with Russell and Sydney. while Russell taking care hos younger brother Ethan.

That last paragraph got me thinking two theories that could happen in the next story. One, they could be the third antagonist and could continue the plans of both Edwin and Honey's to capture the humans. or Two, they are somewhat the catalyst that humans and singled out the established. humans that started to come to Zootopia.

Anyway I'm curious what could happen in the third story.

~MAK
JOE1992 chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
Maybe Gazelle can visit the sick or injured kids in the hospital who've just arrived in Zootopia.
JOE1992 chapter 25 . 8/15/2019
It's been a pleasure reading this series. I understand you want to focus on some of your other stories. It will actually be a nice break to enjoy the finished story of The Keyhole. I actually have some ideas for one shots if you're interested:

1. How Gazelle has reacted and adapted to the humans in Zootopia.

2. Nick helping Eli earn a badge or with something involving his troop.

3. A Valentines Day one shot for all the happy couples next year.

I'm sure whatever you think up will have just as strong of an impact as the series.
Razell chapter 25 . 8/15/2019
I was beginning to wonder about Alex. He seems to be recovering nicely... Of course, after everything he's been through, he'd be dead if he wasn't tough enough to handle it.

Russell!

Never let the rabbit drive...

Poor Jack! He honestly didn't know about Mystic Oasis.

The first rabbit and fox police officers on the ZYPD giving the badge to the first human officer on the force. Rather fitting, I think.

Sheep in Space!

Renato and Lily, Baily and Sophia, Russell and someone whose name I've forgotten and Eli being chased by two girls! Love is in the air!

Mina seems to be a very unpleasant mammal.

Ah, a stranger watching from the shadows! Will this be the person who's behind everything?

Love the story, can't wait to read the next one!
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 25 . 8/15/2019
I love how everyone has found friends and family
JOE1992 chapter 25 . 8/15/2019
Thank you so much for this amazing story, Elite Shade. I enjoyed reading every new chapter you've added. I love all of the characters and how they interact with each other. I don't know when you plan on installing the next story of the series, but I'm definitely looking forward to it, especially with that little foreshadowing at the very end. Until then, maybe you can do some more one shots of this series, if you want to. Thanks again for this wonderful fanfic. It's definitely one of my favorites!
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