bah most of this story is inane chatter that grossly exaggerate things to the point of bashing.
oh evil plot by dumbledore against harry we will help you, now off you go back to hogwarts

ppl call moody mad eye because he is paranoid it has obviously nothing to do with his mad prostetic eye spinning every way

i'll take your baggage to check for listing and tracking charms, after i tell you my master plan so the listining charm can record it all

What aunt is Harry talking about dueling? The only aunt he has from his parents is Petunia.

Andromeda was Sirius' cousin, so it's also not her or hr daughter.

I just re-read this. It’s a great, heart warming family/adventure story.

I love the Tonks family. I hope the get him out of Hogwarts for year 5. That place is a death trap.

I don't understand why Andromeda didn't threaten Snaps about Harry like she did for her daughter.

It's pretty disappointing that the main love interest for Harry's entire lie is the first girl he asks out. It seems like it's true for every fic. I don't know a single couple in real life who are like that. Hell, even canon wasn't like that (if not very far from it). Please, let your characters live life. I wish I could read just a few well written stories without Harry marrying the first girl he asks out, Harry having a harem, or Harry having sex with every attractive girl in Hogwarts.

Why doesn't Tonks just side along apparate Harry?

I do think that maybe McGonagall should replace Dumbledore (Given a warning as well from the governors/ministry), & professor Clearwater made Head of Gryffindor, that would make sense. She's awesome and has a good head on her shoulders! Not bad so far! :)

That was better, a very normal date. Although, this shit with Snape & Malfoy, tends to rather a big *YAWN*, and very tiresome!

Oh Harry wouldn't try anything. What a load of shit Any normal teenager would try "first base to home run" ( or English magical version)!

No offense against you , but I very much hate everything to do with triwizard tournament it is a load of BS and a farce. There is no way Lily would have allowed it, parents rights come first (or guardians). magical contract what a load of shit, and a lie. I always fast forward past it on the video. Can you see JKR allowing her 14 year old daughter allowing this.

If your putting in truth, be-careful your not putting in too much. I've long said that the horcruxes are a load of shit I can understand 1 (LOTR, etc), but 7, please, just throw in a laugh track too. You can't split a soul like that , because manly it doesn't belong to you, nope, not possible. Tolkien proved that, but then he's obviously a better writer than JKR, no offense, she is a elementary school teacher, & hes an Oxford professor (not even close, lol).

Being in quarantine I been looking for a good fic was hoping this could be one, then I saw Harry was not with Ginny and knew this author never read the books if they did then they would know Harry has been in love with Ginny since the first book. I only ship Harry and Ginny and I would never ship Harry and the dark princess Hermione. Sure it's a good story but I just can't bring myself to read it sorry

Glad to see a new chapter,thought you've grown bored,and enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the story.

Btw i hope you can continue Dawn of Darkness,it was good,different and open for many possibilities not the mention to the pairing one of my favs :)