I like how Crowley had doubts about will being halts apprentice

I really loved this because of how aware Crowly was of Halt. I also loved Halt's determination. I just love the idea of Crowley being like "yup totally right" on how much Halt loves Will.

Awesome! It made sense and was in character!

These is fantastic. I love it. :)

This. Is. AMAZING. Oh my gosh, it was so well executed, from how they talked to how they came up with arguments and points, this is just...splendid, my gosh. There are no words to perfectly describe just how great this is.

Very nice. I like your style. :)
And it's always great to see some banter between Halt and Crowley.

Love Lora

I really loved this. It was very well written, and I liked how you portrayed Halt and Crowley's relationship here. I could totally see a conversation like this happening. It was just like discovering a missing scene in the books and I really enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for the awesome short story!