| Reviews for The Haddock Twins: Race to the Edge |
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sharpshot975 chapter 17 . 6/18 Can you continue |
Flashstormplayer chapter 17 . 2/27 Please update soon |
CHSHiccstrid chapter 17 . 1/18 Ahh! A beautiful three Haddock twins episodes! Henry Henry Henry.. When will you see the gang is trigger than you think?! I liked that little plot twist by the way. Oh yes. Hicca really went away at the wrong time. Man. Seriously bad timing. I can’t wait for more! |
iron maker2 chapter 17 . 1/14 Good chap (And i know it sounds petty, but could you not do Arwen suggestion of hicca being blinded, i want snotlout to realize he made this mistake on his own and wants to owe up to it cause honestly that good character development). but you should definitely do arwen suggestion of both twins getting the zippleback lifedebt. and yeah, if Snotlout was concious when Hicca said that she knew what bite that, he would be so pissed off that he could have avoided becoming a chew toy. Also i LOVE how you handle Ruffnut and showing how the Thornston twin really do care for another. |
Arwen the Storyteller chapter 17 . 1/13 Good chapter. Can't wait for Snotlout gets the Axe. I have an idea. How about Hicca gets blinded by the Armourwing's fire for a bit longer than the other dragons. Than after that, she regains her sights and helps the others with the Smokebreaths. Then she could tell Snotlout that it is time for him to own up to his mistakes and stop blaming everyone. I hope for the Zippleback episode. You'll consider the ideas I sent you earlier on mail. I would love for both Hiccup and Hicca to get followed about by Barf and Belch. Or maybe to make a change. It could just be Hicca. Keep up the good work. |
snake screamer chapter 17 . 1/12 Good stuff! could you have Raeda stayed behind with fishleg and the twins cause i want to see this Raeda eyes widen in shocked before laughing hysterically. "IT ISN'T FUNNY RAEDA!" Fishleg said fretfully. "It's a little funny fishlegs." Raeda chuckled (I can see the twins hiring Raeda to redecorate Fishleg hut) "Raeda why are you helping them!" Fishleg snapped "Hey, i'm technically on your side, the twins wanted to just throw everything you have out, i manage to compromise to just half your stuff gone and half there stuff gone." Raeda stated |
VickyT36 chapter 17 . 1/12 Hicca has a lot of work to do. |
crocodilesmile55 chapter 17 . 1/12 Excellent chapter you should do an original chapter in which hicca and raeda discover a girl there age in a dragon hunters trap who can transform into a lycanwing dragon and also wildstar not wanting Henry to runaway from his father anymore and not wanting to see the who healed get hurt by the hunters literary drags him back to the edge to help the others defeat the hunters once and for all. What do you think. |
toosweetkid chapter 15 . 1/11 Viggo! Henry's father is Viggo! |
crocodilesmile55 chapter 16 . 1/1 Great chapters I Henry returns and when you do the chapter hicca and raeda find a girl on the edge's beach and unknown to them can turn into a lycanwing dragon. |
iron maker2 chapter 16 . 1/1 love both new chaps! btw considering how he died, imagine Vigo to tell hiccup and/or Hicca to tell his son that he understand that their relationship is broken, but he hopes with at least this, his son will have one good memory of his father. |
iron maker2 chapter 14 . 11/29/2019 YAY! YOU UPDATED! |
CHSHiccstrid chapter 14 . 11/23/2019 Thank you for three great chapters! I really want to see where you take Hicca and Henry’s relationship. They are so cute together! See you soon hopefully! |
Girlbook chapter 14 . 11/20/2019 I miss this. |
VickyT36 chapter 14 . 11/20/2019 Good chapter. Liked the moment between hicca and henry |