Enjoyed the story thanks

Liked the story but one criticism - you used two different names for older Harry. First he signed the letter sent to Severus as "Albert Square", then a little later you referred to him as "Albert Hall" (perhaps you were thinking of the Royal Albert Hall in London). Anyway, pick one name and stick with it, would you?

This is excellent.

SS and AS-one less than a quidditch team!

Having never even heard of Captain Beaky and his Band I looked it up on youtube and wished I hadn't! But I can see how it fits so nicely into the story. I was only disappointed in Hermione marrying Draco at the end there. The rest of the story had me laughing. It was a great fun read. So thanks for that. And now on to something else to read.

Hey was thoroughly enjoying the story and then remus made the comment concerning hermione maybe having more bugs bunny cartoons...the way you wrote it, I broke up laughing, hell I haven't laughed that hard in years... The rest of the story, no belay that... The whole story was Brilliant and I found myself laughing thru the remainder of it... Man or Woman...Your One Hell of a Writer and storyteller too!

Good story

Great stuff! Thanks so much

extremely thorough and well thought out for a long one-shot!

looking forward to seeing what else you may have written.

Thanks for the enjoyable read!

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Love when Good!Kreacher makes an appearance!

Thanks - good to read,

Really good story. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Cool story.

Liked your changes

Great story even for a one shot. I love that Umbridge never was able to get back into Hogwarts as a Professor and try to ruin the lives of 5th and 7th years by not teaching them anything.

I am loving the stories. You are a very good writer and your stories are very believable. Thankyou for sharing them with us.