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Good story. Dagur was the character I missed most from RTTE, and I like the way you melded him into events from the movie.

I can totally understand when things are hard to write... this is good enough for me though! You really captured Dagur well, and his advice to Hiccup is really good.
I like it!

I can imagine this happening. This was sweet, awesome job!

Good story, very well written.

Some spelling errors, but still a good story. If you decide to go back over it, I recommend reading it out loud. You'll hear the errors and be able to correct them. But like I said, great story. I enjoyed reading it.

Aw, cute story!

That's a cute story ! Dagur and Hiccup are really cute together. I love their siblings relationship !

Good story with an interesting premise. Only one issue; There is absolutely NO evidence from HTTYD1 that Hiccup was ever seriously abused or bullied by anyone-especially Astrid. The one time she manhandles him is in the cove when he tries to physically block her way after having repeatedly lied to her (which Astrid knew he was doing). Furthermore, when Astrid does twist his arm and drop her ax on his stomach, Hiccup's response, "WHY would YOU do that?" clearly indicates it was a behavior he did NOT expect from Astrid.

Great story.

Good story. Thank you.

I like it. A nice sweet story and nothing was OOC. :)