Reviews for Clarity
claraowl chapter 2 . 6/11
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas
Guineapigs1 chapter 2 . 5/15/2018
Sho deserved everything that happened. It's good though that he didn't have a chance to mess up Kyoko's life by bringing her with him to Tokyo. I'm happy that Kyoko and Kuon were able to marry and that Sho realizes just what he lost now. Thanks for a great read!
brennakai chapter 2 . 11/7/2017
Ummmm, it make me a bad person if i enjoy watching Sho suffer... i mean it is kinda perfect that he realized that she was his driving force. I like to think his parents would be like this with het of they had half an idea how he treated her.
Thank you for the story
dmggmd chapter 2 . 10/24/2017
Ahh! I loved this! I'm so glad Sho got his comeuppance!
black neko hime chapter 2 . 10/22/2017
I feel a bit bad for Sho. Thanks for writing this. I wouldn't mind reading a full story Kyoko's life as you've written it.
PaulaGaTo chapter 2 . 10/22/2017
wow...me encantó...simplemente lo que Kyoko merece!...y tambien SHO jajaja
PaulaGaTo chapter 1 . 10/22/2017
jajaja...que simple habria sido la vida de KYoko si hubiera pasado asi!
A Musing Brunette chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Interesting how it works out for Sho without his token adoring devotee, Kyoko. As I would expect, he goes through girls as if they were a weekly food delivery to a business.

Meanwhile, Kyoko is making her way up the ladder in show biz and even marries Kuon. Now, years later Sho finally sees what he's lost and can do nothing about it while he witnesses Kyoko and Kuon happy as can be with a growing family. :D
A Musing Brunette chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
A good "what if" scenario. Kyoko still hearing what Sho thought of her, but before he had a chance at running off with her to Tokyo and putting her through all that crap. Instead, she already had the opportunity to become an actress and with Sho's declaration to his mother and, unwittingly, in front of Kyoko she was able to leave and start anew. Able to heal at a much faster rate and away from Sho's antagonistic ways.

Kyoko and Ren find each other and she doesn't have the same unhealthy bitterness, emotional scarring or disdain for love. Which means Ren is able to open up to her a lot sooner and disclose his true self to her. They can have a healthy relationship.

Wonderful. A different series of events.
Wildthinker chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Loved your story, never actually pictured or wrote one by Shotaro's view, quite refreshing indeed
Crazy4Animation chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Kuon and Kyoko are so cute and lovely together. Be Jealous Sho. You deserve it. See how happy she is with her Corn without you.
Loved it. Love you dear.
I hope to read more stories from you.
Stay Blessed always
Crazy4Animation chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Celebrations! Shoutaro's ego got the best of him. His loss. Kyoko's dating Ren yeahhhh!
hehehe I'm evil to enjoy Sho's suffering. He pisses me off :/
Loved the chapter!
Umiron chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Short and sweet. :D