You're a brilliant author! I just love the characterization you put in the story. I really like how you portrayed Caesar in a cute, childlike view. I can fully imagine him as the type of person to be energetic and passionate when he was young. The ending was really touching as well. Heh, and don't get me going about Albert. *ish a huge Caesar and Albert fan. XD * Your story was done really well. _

Wow. Just wow. I really love this story, even though I'm not Caesar or Albert's biggest fan. Couple things though. I figured out that the teacher was Apple, right? Who was the girl who ran into Caesar?

Also, there's a bit of formatting problems there in the middle where Caesar and the girl are talking, but other than that, my only other bit of contention is Caesar's age. How old is he supposed to be in this story? Toward the end, he does seem older, like someone in University, but near the beginning, I just couldn't get it out of my head that he was ten or so.

Still, this is one of the best I've read from you. Definitely awesome. Keep it up.

Aw. Poor, poor Caesar. That was so sad. But a very good story. I could feel how much Caesar cared for his brother here and it made it all that more tragic in the end. But very nice. I enjoyed it a lot.

d0d... That was awesome. Well written, sweet expose into just why Caesar-who hardly seems like a Silverberg-would challenge his brother so. I love. Great story. _

Excellent piece! _ Well written with great character defining moments. I'll definitaly have to look through your archive and see what else you've got. :)

one thing i can say about this, it made me cry. I'm still crying while writing this, it's extremely touching and it touches on how the two brithers became enemies in 3. I hope to see more from you~

ps: best song to listen with this: "birdcage" by gackt.

wow makes ya think! i really liked the tie in with julius caesar, and then it got sad at the end, wich is an important aspect in a story i hope caesar will get his revenge! please keep writting! n_n

Cool story...

Albert broke the promise...

He's mean...

write more...

Wow! That was truly amazing! I loved every moment of reading this. It's a great story!

You uber-talented writer person you!

I really like how the narration reflects Caesar's childlike energy and passion...it makes the story that much more poignant, too.

The one thing that was missing was Caesar's apathetic calmness. Unless it was something he cultivated later...well, he's what, eleven in this fic? So I suppose it can be excused, but I'd think we'd see a little of it, somewhere, though I'm not sure how it would manifest itself here... Hrm, well...I don't know.

(BTW, young-Apple -is- a lot like Hermione. ' This girl isn't too much like her at all... If it's anything, it's the frizzy hair.)

(Apple is like Plikt, too, but we had established that previously. )

*is incredibly glad she has read "The Tragedy of Julius Caesar"* What an awesome story... I loved how Caesar's feelings were so tumultuous by the end of the story. And I absolutely LOVED the hintings of Shakespeare's play in here. Since this story took place in March, and was posted on March 15th, is it safe to say that you were going for the effect of "Beware the Ides of March?"

*grins* And Caesar's last line! "Even you, Albert? Even you!" You flatter Julius Caesar's last words with the parallel situations. _

I love how you handle the Silverbergs. I've only read three of your fics, and I can honestly make that last statement. Your obsession with them creates wonderful stories, and I hope you continue writing. Once again, a wonderful job!

This is really nice! Hope you write more! Looking forward too it. _

yo what a great story!I love story wit the silverbergs in it and yours r so good it not funny. I hope you dont mind but I am gonna add you on my author favourites