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I really loved this story so much! It felt so real, and was written really well! And people say fanfiction is not real literature...this was honestly one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I have refrained myself from reviewing this until now cause I knew I would just be repeating over and over again that I just really liked this story! I loved all the details you put into this story, and all the effort you put into making it. I especially loved the fact that you didnt constantly update your SI's information like some other fanfictions do, and instead kept it realistic. Most longer fanfictions I have to stop reading half way through, or at least take breaks in reading them, but this one was so beautiful, that I couldn't put it down! Thank you so much for writing this, because I loved every second I spent reading it. I'm kinda sad that it is over, but also satisfied that I finished it. I also read your other story and I am hoping you continue writing masterpieces like this in the future. So once again,thank you for this wonderful experience.

I loved it. Easily one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. You managed to maintain a balance between an all-knowing SI and the plot without changing too much or too little. Loved Daddy!Madara.

I am in love with this story, it's a one of a kind!

i love this so much! i cant believe this doesn't have over 2k faves yet, this work is so awesome. i look forwatd to more of your eorks, author-sama!

This was awesome. I really don't have words aside from the fact that I loved this.
I'm glad, however, that there were no lemons. Yaoi is fine, it's kinda cute, but if there were actual lemons, I'd have noped the hell out of here on the back of a Chocobo faster than you could say "Sephiroth".

Again, loved this!

I think this is the sixth or seventh time (definitely possible for it to be more to be honest, all I do is read) that I've re-read this. This is one of my favorite books I've ever read, not going to lie. Amazing job Mello.

damn so excited to read this :DDDDD
this is my first time reading a fic ABOUT my favorite akatsuki member :V

I loved this story. Deidara' s attitude and personality made me laugh most of the time, especially the way he treats other characters. Maybe one day you can make a spin-off or something short related to it.

refreshing, at the same time...
dont have a good grip with this fast pace, you know?
4 out of 5 bazoogas

Yes Mega Ultra Chicken!

What is the male version of puberty and what is the difference between regular blood and period blood? I'm curious now, thanks Kimi - kun!

I LOVE TOPH!

I want an ItaDei!

Thank you for the amazing story :)