Why bother posting if you can't even proofread the summary.

Wanted to comment this last chapter but Itachi is bit OOC. The dialogue is unrealistic in my opinion and is way too bland. The nail in the coffin is how Itachi spilled the Sharingan, he is a good guy but he isn't stupid.

Along with that is the fact the story is generally written. For fucks sakes there is a long standing tradition on how fics are written so when it doesn't follow it raises a red flag instantly.

Don't take this as a hate comment premise and start was interesting but I personally dislike how you went about Itachi's character and this scene with the queen and stuff. Way too unrealistic in my mind especially after reading other stories that gave off a far more realistic feel.

Hope you improve your writing since this story feels flat and boring to read.

Hate that bitch Agnes, rubs me in the wrong way.

Interesting so far but from what I know of FoZ then Itachi should be able to curb stomp in a straight up fight, with his ninja training and cunning intellect it would also be hard to catch him off guard since presumably he has training in espionage, subterfuge, assassination, tracking, counter tracking and a whole lot more BS I know nothing about. So unless he gets caught off guard by a strange spell he'll most likely be something along the lines of a deadly blade that is capable of killing you directly or discreetly.

Update soon! I like this story! :)

The second whales said he an henriette were lovers shit started flying through my head. One of those being
"The Incest... is... is... I dont know what to say"

Him being able to guess that Itachi was thinking if they possesed void magic isn't really sharp thinking. That question would be obvious, but go off bro. I still enjoy the story

To join the chorus, use quotation marks. As it is now, your work is painful to read.

I need u to continue pls, its one of the best itachi stories ever...

please keep goin

Stop using hyphens instead of quotation marks. It isn't quirky or enjoyable. It's jarring and makes it incredibly difficult to engage myself in your story.

I swear your use of hyphens instead of quotation marks is like having a bucket of cold water thrown on you. It’s an abrupt change that I’m not used to and find it difficult to like. Regardless I’m enjoying your story, still waiting to see the “brothers” part though.

use quotation marks! ya know... "these"

Muy chido xd

Can’t wait for the next chapter

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