Moar

Uhhhh maybe get an editor, story is pretty interesting though, just the grammar and tense needs work. Good job

very good

UPDATE!

Fantastic work I can't wait for more. I need more lol I'm addicted.

another great chapter! update immediately!

please update as soon as possible

Time for some Izuku sass, especially to Katsuki "explosive embarrassing" Bakugou. His Quirk is the most villainous, especially with his outlook.

That was fantastic but a it's a little weird yo ? Are having izuku hate ururaka and iida I mean come on man. Can you explain to me more in depth and I know he doesn't want to get close to someone but disgust?

please update immediately

I meant middle ground

As a pretty well known author in this archive I have some advice. One, increase the length to 3k or close to it in the beginning. Two, make a summary or no one will care about the story. Three, give a better explanation of the events happening.

It is disappointing to see potential wasted. Read someone like Titaniumdragon22 stories or Amnity for examples of how to do the story.

Fantastic work I can't wait for more.

Good work but yeah his quirk would have many strong uses in rescue like someone is trapped if he can control it he can destroy the very things they are trapped by like hero number 13 with his quirk he can kill with no mercy as well awesome work.

This wouldnt have been so hard to read if you had someone arrange your sentences correctly. It looks like it was just translated from another language and left like it was. Great story though, just really hard to read