NOOO A CLIFF HANGER

Niceee

Thank you for the book.

I do hope that one day you come back and take Yagura out of this story. He doesn’t belong. I read this for Gaara no one else

When is the update coming

Great well I guess this is the part where this story becomes absolute shit. I don't know why you had to bring Yagura.

God! I always hate it when authors decide to add such random characters from the original would in their crossovers.
It makes me feel like the MC is not all that special. And would he be when every other jinchiriki and shinobi could come to Remnant through some stupid way.
So fucking ridiculous. I'm dropping this novel. Bye

See this is what I hate the most. I loved everything about this crossover but I hate other characters coming into the new world. Yess Gaara is overpowered as f*** but that doesn't mean you have to get Yagura a Kage for him to fight against.

are you still planing to update because i think this is pretty good

HEYYYYY! YOU! YES! YOU!
In all honesty this story is great I barely see any spelling errors and I have read this three times over the way you molded Gaara is this is amazing the development does'nt seem forced and honestly is makes alot of sense I'll keep an eye on updates

ohhh no, it hasent been updated yet, i really want cardin to get his ass kicked

I like it can’t wait for more

I’m gonna be blunt. The story has promise, but it hurts to read sometimes. I’d say you need to proofread more. Either spend a bit more time to check over grammar and spelling or find a willing beta reader. Trust me, it can and will make a good difference.

But thats’s just what I think.

Overall, not bad at all, keep it up! You have my support.

Ahh like that you lost me why ppl always add others why not just Gaara adding yagura was lame

This is amazing can’t wait for next chap