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Guest chapter 3 . 4/29 Beautiful. I'm guessing Hakuba or Kaito but if you put him with Aoko or Akako for kicks, that's be interesting too. |
Shinran rules chapter 3 . 8/27/2019 Kaito is going to be his partner |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2019 Thanks for doing a different beginning on detective Conan. It' s really hard to find a story like this:) ps the story so far is great. |
XxThe-Crest-Of-AnubisxX chapter 3 . 1/17/2019 Shinichi going to pair up with Kaito? Ai-chan with Saguru? Anyway next chapter please |
detektivloki chapter 3 . 12/15/2018 when does the next chapter come? |
Mitsuhi chapter 3 . 11/10/2018 PLEASE UPDATE THIS, I love how the three of them admire Shinichi of his work. I feel that they should have been really good friends at the beginning of the series or somewhere in between, him being friends with them separately show that, but how nice it would be if it was like this... Please continue it Thank you |
ayy chapter 3 . 10/27/2018 more more! i need more of this! please update! i love this idea so much! |
nequam-tenshi chapter 3 . 12/31/2017 In my previous review, I didn't realize I misspelled Yukiko's name as Yukio! Could you include of a describe of the new Ai? I can't get a clear picture of her. Happy New Years! |
nequam-tenshi chapter 3 . 12/30/2017 I'm excited to read another one of your stories! Your Sense Series is still one of my DC favorites! Is Ai written for love or sorrow in your story? I love that you've added her! Will you end up adding Sera Masumi as one of the detectives? I want to see Masumi baffle Ekoda! I can just imagine the mayhem! Will Mary show up as well? Are Ai and Yuta playing twins or just siblings or cousins? I would love to see Ai/Shiho partnered up with Kaito, Sagaru, or Momoi Keiko. As for Yuta/Shinichi, Sagaru, Akako, or Momoi. Kaito can bring out their more spontaneous sides and learning tricks from the son of Yukio's mentor of disguise would add to their arsenal of skills. Kaito would learn to trust them and the same in turn, especially with the Black Organization. Ai/Shiho's knowledge with chemicals would help with heists if such trust was forged. Sagaru would allow for Yuta/Shinichi to assist in crime scenes and not just murders due to his place with the Kaito Kid Squad. Their love for Sherlock would be an epicenes I can't describe! Sagaru would allow for Ai/Shiho to interact with someone who has Western mannerisms she's grown up with and the understanding of being halfblooded in Japan. Akako would chew and spit Yuta/Shinichi out into making him a puppy unwillingly with her magic and/or make his logic and mindset of "One Truth" tilt on the wayside with magic. Akako and Ai/Shiho are alike in personality, more realistic, and magic is another tool for Shiho to hide from her Black Organization demons. And there's the fact Shiho could probably rule Ekoda with Akako... Never mind, them ruling Ekoda might be too much for non-witchcraft believers like Kaito! Momoi Keiko is the more down to Earth character in Magic Kaito since she's not a magician or detective. As a non-affiliated individual to crime, Keiko would allow for Ai/Shiho to be an everyday child which is something she's never been. From Magic Kaito the anime, her personality is less in your face and more supportive; both Yuta and Ai would benefit in knowing her but a gentler personality would be welcoming. Keiko could be a silent, normalizing support for Ai or Yuta. As for Aoko, I don't like her personality all the well. Aoko is caring but temperamental and that mop attack of her is just off putting. An actual child would see an older girl attacking someone with a mop as violent and to be feared; they already have enough violent people around them, they don't need more. For Yuta/Shinichi, to be around someone who looks so much like Ran would not do him any favors. I get trying to get Kaito to settle down for class but she's not the class rep and not responsible for Kaito's actions despite her feelings for him and Kaito teasing her. In Volume 3 of the Magic Kaito manga, Aoko would prefer for Sagaru to lose in a Kaito Kid heist because if Sagaru does lose, she would go to a concert with Kaito instead. Additionally, referencing herself in third person is seen as childish in Japanese culture. It's cute to an extent but Shinichi and Shiho would be most likely be annoyed with her speaking that way. Don't get me wrong because Aoko is a likeable character but her need to not be alone would mesh better with an actual child instead of a teen-turned-child; she would be the big sister but not a big sister to Yuta or Ai. A normal child would give her dad less of a worry too! The manga reference and third person information is from the Detective Conan World website. Happy New Year! |
riszang chapter 3 . 10/15/2017 between Kaito and Hakuba, I really couldn't decide which one I like. Can't it be both? |
EnjeruTantei chapter 3 . 9/26/2017 I suspect shinichi is going to maybe get paired with Kaito (although Hakuba would be a nice twost too). 3 |
Riddle-Snape chapter 3 . 9/24/2017 good chap, even tho nothing much happened... oh, i wonder whooooo could be shin-chans partner hmmm... lol, really i hope it will be kaito... i know he could be good with hakuba, but no fun that way... hope youwill update soon |
Mel72000 chapter 3 . 9/24/2017 If I would hazard a guess, I would say Kaito Kuroba... Thank you very much for this chapter and this fic : when we see every mistakes of Conan in the last chapters, it's time he learns to be discret ! |
Caesar704 chapter 3 . 9/23/2017 Actually I prefer with Edogawa Conan and Haibara Ai name and . Conan appearance is still same but Shinichi hair is lighter and his skin is a little paler. and I read this with Sasaki Yuta and Ai name is like I read story with OC and I hate OC. . but actually it's a good story. |
Helenvoid chapter 3 . 9/23/2017 Omg omg I LOVE it I guess shinichi with kaito? Ai has more possibilities like Aoko, Akako or other Ekoda girls (because she prefers ayumi over the boys so it would be better with a girl) especially one who can team up against kaito ;) Anyway plz plz plz plz plz update |